meep. XD
could i get a version without the sign in the BG?
also you can get a hold of me through sushimeep[at]yahoo.com

; v ; Still disabled regardless. It's a little hard to note someone if I still have their old info and am not 100% on the new stuff.
I'm glad you found this though... Wish I could've known to do this without the sign. Editing is a pain when the image is actually print sized. xD

Buttttt here you go!
http://i.imgur.com/uEj0yLO.jpg
Thanks again for commissioning me! And my apologies on the wait.

I understand it's not my art or anything however;
I know her characters pretty well / live with her so
she doesn't mind my critique she's allowing me to do so.

But on Meep her tail looks fab but the only thing is
she has 3 bands on her tail not 4, the last band would continue and cover the entire tip.
But as for Beep he looks incredibly too buff I think it might be the fact his head is disproportionately too small which is putting his body shape out of place. o3o His head being a bit bigger with larger ears would even him out a bit more.

Over all I really enjoy the picture, as does she, it's really fascinating seeing characters in different styles especially the way you did the coloring on them is really neat. It makes it look really soothing to the eyes. I also really enjoy how you drew meep's expression, she almost looks sassy and sleepy all at the same time which is pretty dang cute.

Over all this is a really great piece, I just hope the critique is acceptable; I just woke up so forgive me if the wording is off-putting. ^^

I'm sorry, I did not know any of this about these characters.
The references I was given depicted Beep as anything from really cool and guyish to super cute and "blushy desu". So there was not any specific body type for me to go off of.
The two pictures of Meep that I was given showed her with a different number of rings on her tail. One of them she had two and another she had four.
I hope you gave this critique to the other artists who drew these characters incorrectly so that this does not happen to artists, like myself, who have to come by and drawn them later with the same pictures as references. Or, perhaps these specific details should be given during the commission process so that the artist does not make the same mistakes as others previous.

Thank you for letting me know about these issues so that I may fix them in any commissions I may get from her in the future if she chooses to commission me again. u v u

You're welcome, as I am unsure of the time frame between purchasing until now uvu but
I think during that time frame ref sheets were made so I can understand when the issue happens.
I hope I didn't come off as too harsh or anything I tried to be honest but not to be rude at the same time.
-hugs-

otherwise it looks damn awesome though uvu you have a cute style~!

Thank you very much!

And, actually, there were months between now and the purchase due to sickness/computer issues/backlogs. ; v ;
SO I can definitely see if there new, more exact references that I didn't get. It's perfectly alright. u v u!

A sweet mix of cute and cool, great job. :D