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![-HM- JT & Deke [WIP]](http://d.furaffinity.net/art/kain3/1208558156/1208558156.kain3_deke___jt1_b.jpg "Click to change the View")
A WIP of a comission Deke asked. His two wrestlers characters.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Muscle
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 850 x 728px
File Size 320.5 kB
-HM- it's pretty good, though it looks a tiny bit flat in some areas... not like mashed in with a rolling pin, but it looks like it could use a little more perspective on some of the areas... the arm of the wolf that's bent up (it's tangenting a little as well with the other arm)
maybe for the next one try and avoid layering the arm like that? maybe give it a little tilt inwards or outwards?
still, very nice attention to detail and the details for the anatomy look good.
maybe for the next one try and avoid layering the arm like that? maybe give it a little tilt inwards or outwards?
still, very nice attention to detail and the details for the anatomy look good.
-HM-
In general, I think the forearms are too thin given the thickness of the upper arm, and the wrists are a bit awkward. To be fair, the wrist is one of the hardest body parts to get right, so it's not THAT bad.
Dude on the right's face seems odd, like it's just not fitting into perspective with everything else.
Dude in the back's torso is awkward too I just noticed. It looks like it was squashed, rather than rotated in perspective. First off, when hunched over, nobody has a six pack, there's going to be some rolling and folding of the skin going on. Also, the contours of the torso features would curve along with the roundness of the torso.
In general, I think the forearms are too thin given the thickness of the upper arm, and the wrists are a bit awkward. To be fair, the wrist is one of the hardest body parts to get right, so it's not THAT bad.
Dude on the right's face seems odd, like it's just not fitting into perspective with everything else.
Dude in the back's torso is awkward too I just noticed. It looks like it was squashed, rather than rotated in perspective. First off, when hunched over, nobody has a six pack, there's going to be some rolling and folding of the skin going on. Also, the contours of the torso features would curve along with the roundness of the torso.
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