I have no idea what I'm actually gonna call this, I might stick with May Celebrations, maybe not.
Category Story / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 113px
File Size 13.2 kB
Shite, up fer an hour and no responses? What's wrong with the folk of FA that no one's readin' such a marvelous start to a story. And, correct me if I'm wrong, but this reads like the start of a fairly romantic short novel, rather than simply being a short story. Grrr....write more. This is sweetness incarnate.
*shrugs* Same thing happened with Changing Lives. I enjoyed writing and posting it here, but never got many responses or reads. And yeah you're right it is the start I'm just hoping I have time to keep working on it.
Thank you for catching that mistake too. I have to print stuff off and read it in order to catch that kind of mistake.
Thank you for catching that mistake too. I have to print stuff off and read it in order to catch that kind of mistake.
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