Good arc.

Hmm, I wonder what is happening.

I really like Helen's hair; it all but glows!

Color me frustrated...

I've heard critics say Mormonism is little more than a cult. I try very hard to keep an honest and open mind about everything, but in all honesty this story has done little to change things around for me. Not that I'm any less harsh on my own Catholicism, mind you. My beef is with those who use the Bible as a drunk uses a lightpost - for support, rather than illumination.

I did, however, read on as far as I could into the next story. I admire your ability to use a wide variety of animals as characters. Proves just how talented an artist you are, whereas I'm just a third-rate hack...