Forced myself to write a sort of pre story thing to get myself into the actual writing mood, totally connected to my idea, just using this to test the waters and try to inspire myself to get back into things.
Wrote it in an odd format, experimenting with a more indirect way of telling the story of things, not from a narrator stand point honestly, may try other methods in my free time with the next bit I wanna try and write to see how it works for me.
Negative comments will likely hurt my soul and make me cry, just sayin. Criticism still appreciated though, of the constructive variety. :U
Wrote it in an odd format, experimenting with a more indirect way of telling the story of things, not from a narrator stand point honestly, may try other methods in my free time with the next bit I wanna try and write to see how it works for me.
Negative comments will likely hurt my soul and make me cry, just sayin. Criticism still appreciated though, of the constructive variety. :U
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 5.9 kB
I'm gonna admit im not a fan of reading... I enjoyed this~ I like the style it was done in like some kind of journal and i made me think of finding a journal in a game how it starts of like this, gets worse it seems and then a twist of some sorts.
I personally think you did a good job on this batty~ and I hope you do more~
I personally think you did a good job on this batty~ and I hope you do more~
I gave you my general idea, to anyone perusing commentary, its an interesting read. It sorta seeks to fall into an almost Lovecratian style, Man finds mystery, man seeks out mystery, mystery consumes man. The fun is in the mystery, I would like to see something like this, but expanded into a more realized short rather than a series of journal entries, or at least I'd like to see the entries themselves expanded to provide more information, it just seems too short to build up any of the suspense your looking for.
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