Ah good, you posted it! Glad to see it all together, it's nice~

Thanks! Took a lot longer than I thought it would, but I'm glad to see it finished. I hope to write some more stuff soon.

When some candy get's delivered to two unfortunate (or highly fortunate) furs, things grow outta hand. What's the intention of those who were behind the candy, or of those who made it in the first place. One inflating like some sort of balloon, the other putting on a massive amount of weight from delicious chocolate balls.

An excellent story, and one of which that is good for a first try. I can see where the .txt document didn't like it when it was uploaded (trust me, it happens with everyone).

A simple solution is to first write it in Word, then when you save/export, you click the option to allow for character substitution. This will replace the " and ' with ones that are text friendly.

Other than that, a good story.

I think the only way to fix the quotation marks and apostrophes and ellipses is to enter them as plaintext, rather than allowing your word processing software to use the usual macros. (Great story, by the way. )