"Like the moon and the sun
We must be apart
It has been done"

Dont worry, there are always eclipses... hehe

Nice little poem!1 (nice to see you´re not dead!!)

Thanks

I'm gonna try and do more with this in the future.

The situation, that is. Not the poem itself.

Bravo, bravo! My oh my, how long did this take you to write? Most of my poems I think about for a minute or two and then write them (in total, takes about five to ten minutes), but boy oh boy, this is something else! It's long (very long), it's got a good use of the English vocabulary, it's got a charming, yet dark tone to it, just all around perfect! I might have to try sitting and actually thinking one of my poems out before I just write it. Again, bravo!

Somewhere from 10 to 25 minutes, I think. I'm not good with time.
And thank you.