
Commission for Preed Part 2
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fat Furs
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 670 x 700px
File Size 193.7 kB
One criticism I have here, no offense to anything, is just the way you did the fat-pinch. It's like a shirt, not very thick; If you opened up a space between the finger and thumb, and had the fat fill it it would seem a lot thicker and thus a lot more like fat.
Again, not to sound rude, it's just something you might wanna think about and practice. I don't wanna put you down man, great pic otherwise
Again, not to sound rude, it's just something you might wanna think about and practice. I don't wanna put you down man, great pic otherwise
I can't pinch me that much, I have a hard belly~
well the thing I wanted you to know is that you had a valid point right now but it cannot be applied in this one just because of a matter of light source, I would have shade the end of the pinch if the upper fold wasn't in there, but since the thumb is lifting the fat against the light source it should be fine that way~
shapes with shading are hard to meassure sometimes, but you will get around them really soon if you start shading your pictures~
well the thing I wanted you to know is that you had a valid point right now but it cannot be applied in this one just because of a matter of light source, I would have shade the end of the pinch if the upper fold wasn't in there, but since the thumb is lifting the fat against the light source it should be fine that way~
shapes with shading are hard to meassure sometimes, but you will get around them really soon if you start shading your pictures~
Well, I do shade soem of my pictures, it's just that at the moment I currently lack the program I used to draw with. I only offered a bit of criticism for the future as you have done so previously for me; please don't reflect my lack of shading into this because I do actually shade pics, it's just not all too often.
You are a better artist than me, all I did was try to help you improve, okay?
You are a better artist than me, all I did was try to help you improve, okay?
I dunno why you took that in that way ._.
with shading I meant cellshading, again, looking at the shapes for shading, you do another kind of shading that I believe you use oc and the water color brush in another layer using a grey tone.
now.. again, don't take things bad D:! art is fun :3
with shading I meant cellshading, again, looking at the shapes for shading, you do another kind of shading that I believe you use oc and the water color brush in another layer using a grey tone.
now.. again, don't take things bad D:! art is fun :3
I have several shading methods; but my most recent is in-depth cel shading by mapping out areas of grey over a black and white sketch as to where light would fall and then adding solid colouring underneath the multiply layering of greys.
I have used watercolour brushes in that way, but I use that for quick shading a lot, it's just fast and effective. The "Lazy man's way", basically.
Doesn't matter any more anyway, I can't draw on my current computer
I have used watercolour brushes in that way, but I use that for quick shading a lot, it's just fast and effective. The "Lazy man's way", basically.
Doesn't matter any more anyway, I can't draw on my current computer
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