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This is my submission for the caged Thursday prompt. A poem written from Tahlir viewpoint as he struggles to bring his group of fellow adventures into one happy group. All the characters belong to fellow roleplayers. This is an Adventure Academy story and more info can be found by reading a few of my Thursday prompts and nearly all of 
cerih.
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Category Story / Fantasy
Species Avian (Other)
Size 120 x 90px
File Size 1.3 kB
Very interesting little piece. I'm happy I'm somewhat familiar with Cerih's TP responses, otherwise this wouldn't make any sense. I enjoyed reading the poem, although I'm not much into poetry. Sums pretty much the situation and reveals more about the mind-set of Tahlir. Good work.
You are much better at critiquing then I. I usually can only like of something as brilliant (read lame) as "wow, this is awesome". I am horribly selfish when it comes to explaining things. If it's said somewhere else I don't repeat it. That and Cerih and I were playing a bit of Thursday Prompt tag at the time.
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