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Esta pieza es un compañero de Gata Oscura, basada en la ilusión de que pronto va a encontrarse a sí misma a un compañero. También quería intentar escribir una pieza más en español, a pesar de que los hablantes nativos de la lengua probablemente de acuerdo en que mis habilidades son poco menos horrible.
This piece is a companion to Gata Oscura, based on the wishful thinking that she’ll soon find herself a mate. I also wanted to try writing another piece in Spanish, even though native speakers of the language will likely agree that my abilities are nothing short of horrible. :P
I also realise that proper Spanish requires accented letters. Unfortunately, the .txt format will not allow that, so I have included the piece in its proper format below:
Gato montés
Impresionantemente guapo
Espíritu desierto
En los vientos caliente y secos
Más viejo que el tiempo mismo
Usted sabe los secretos de estas tierras
Sus huesos antiguos en cada grano de polvo
Y sus antepasados han tocado cada roca
El olor del aire secreto océano
Trae la necesidad de su compañero
Se une a la danza de la vida
El juntos futuro y el pasado
This piece is a companion to Gata Oscura, based on the wishful thinking that she’ll soon find herself a mate. I also wanted to try writing another piece in Spanish, even though native speakers of the language will likely agree that my abilities are nothing short of horrible. :P
I also realise that proper Spanish requires accented letters. Unfortunately, the .txt format will not allow that, so I have included the piece in its proper format below:
Gato montés
Impresionantemente guapo
Espíritu desierto
En los vientos caliente y secos
Más viejo que el tiempo mismo
Usted sabe los secretos de estas tierras
Sus huesos antiguos en cada grano de polvo
Y sus antepasados han tocado cada roca
El olor del aire secreto océano
Trae la necesidad de su compañero
Se une a la danza de la vida
El juntos futuro y el pasado
Category Poetry / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Feline (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 428 B
For some reason, I find reading things in languages I only slightly understand to be very fascinating. If not for the meaning of the words, I see beauty in the way they fit together, and find much enjoyment in them for not quite the reason they were made. I've gone as far as making up my own language that while I've not put strict meaning to 90% of words, I find I can still develop expression through how the words look and sound, than what they actually mean. While I can't comment on what this poem means, I can certainly appreciate it in the way I appreciate visual art.
Doesn't look really bad, I know you are learning how to spanish, so If you want I can teach you for free spanish if you help me to improve my english.
Your abilities are good, but you did it so much far away better than other furs I met.
About the poetry, looks fine, for a spanish people, could be hard to understand because the poetry looks strange and without logical. But yeah, is easy to use and easy rithm.
Please, continue writting some more, I know it's difficult for anyone to write something in another language but...TAKE A TRY, YOU ARE DOING IT RIGHT. I liked it!
Your abilities are good, but you did it so much far away better than other furs I met.
About the poetry, looks fine, for a spanish people, could be hard to understand because the poetry looks strange and without logical. But yeah, is easy to use and easy rithm.
Please, continue writting some more, I know it's difficult for anyone to write something in another language but...TAKE A TRY, YOU ARE DOING IT RIGHT. I liked it!
Muchas gracias por sus amables comentarios. Sí, estoy de acuerdo en que una de las tareas más difíciles que una persona puede encontrar al aprendizaje de un idioma diferente, es la estructura y la lógica de esa lengua. Aunque puedo entender las palabras y frases, el problema viene de la construcción de sentencias basadas en una lógica más adecuada al Inglés.
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