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Well here is part 2 of the story. Hope you all enjoy. ^^ More to come soon, and hopefully some more poetry as well. Stay tuned.
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You have a knack for strong, pungent, powerful, and flavorful short parts. These short, sweet journal entries are more akin to poetry or prose than actual story writing. They're powerful like espresso, but also short like espresso. Which is my only real problem with your writing.
I wonder what you could do with more serious focus on length. Then again if you intend to post often, this will not be a problem.
Cheers.
I wonder what you could do with more serious focus on length. Then again if you intend to post often, this will not be a problem.
Cheers.
Understood, I'm posting another part now, I'll try to make the parts a bit longer as well post more frequently. So far, I've been posting what i had written already with my role play friend, when we start writing new stuff I'll keep in mind what you said and try to lengthen each part. Thanks for the feedback.
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