So I inked Anju, and I was hoping that the proportions (they are very hyung tae kimish) were working. It's difficult to express the position that she (the inked one is in) but she's leaning very heavily to the left (her left), which I'm going to use colors to demonstrate. Her pose is what I could best describe as almost heimanesque. If you guys could give me any suggestions, I'd love to hear them. This is some wrist-breaking work, but along with the paper that I'm procrastinating on and the two commissions that I'm working on simultaneously, I've got more than my work cut out for me.

Tell me what you think about her hair, too! I thought it turned out well. I know I'm saying this, but I'm going to get a bunch of woo, boobs or something that isn't constructive, but if you do, I'll be eternally grateful. though I should probably those sorts of requests to a different forum.

Realistically, can you tell what's where and and read the body language? And with these re-todd-ed angles, can you give me any feedback? Thanks.