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Title not finalized. Just something I've been working on; Drafted up a world and species within. I changed my more known species into something of my own for... Reasons. I want to write more as I like the possibilities I have in my head but we'll see.
This is mostly likely going to be a completely clean fantasy novel and series, So I'm sure it won't garner that much attention. But. Just wanted to post and see if I get any feedback at all on it.
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This is mostly likely going to be a completely clean fantasy novel and series, So I'm sure it won't garner that much attention. But. Just wanted to post and see if I get any feedback at all on it.
Icon was done by
deja-blu
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 18.5 kB
It's descriptive, but has no conflict so far. The only conflict introduced is that women aren't allowed to do men's jobs, but that's resolved at the end when he decides to let her learn the job anyway. I would expect the next scene to show how that isn't as cut and dry as it seems. Or maybe the main conflict will be introduced, if not that.
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