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The girls exited the tub slowly, Scarlet first, then Natasha. With them went my heart, i was beginning to shake, and if it hadn't been for the fact that was holding Fran's hand, i might have attempted to run away, But here i was, stuck.
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"Don't worry, everything will be okay." and like that she skipped away from me and caught up with Scarlet, at the shower doors, leaving me to deal with my fate, to deal with my feelings, to tell Fran everything...Everything.
The first part of my art trade with KittyOfFandomDoom. This scene is directly based on the story he wrote for his half, Friday Night. We decided that since he wrote a story, it's only fair that I do two pieces in exchange, which is fair.
I... went into way more detail than I probably should have on this one ^^' I already had the image in my head when I read the story though, so wanted to get it looking like it. This is more commission-level work, but at least I'm pushing my background painting. The water effects could use work though.
As you can imagine, this brought all sorts of challenges. I'm pleased with the outcome though :) I'm not setting the option, but feel free to critique this if you like.
Should I mature warning this one?
KittyOfFandomDoom
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"Don't worry, everything will be okay." and like that she skipped away from me and caught up with Scarlet, at the shower doors, leaving me to deal with my fate, to deal with my feelings, to tell Fran everything...Everything.
The first part of my art trade with KittyOfFandomDoom. This scene is directly based on the story he wrote for his half, Friday Night. We decided that since he wrote a story, it's only fair that I do two pieces in exchange, which is fair.
I... went into way more detail than I probably should have on this one ^^' I already had the image in my head when I read the story though, so wanted to get it looking like it. This is more commission-level work, but at least I'm pushing my background painting. The water effects could use work though.
As you can imagine, this brought all sorts of challenges. I'm pleased with the outcome though :) I'm not setting the option, but feel free to critique this if you like.
Should I mature warning this one?
KittyOfFandomDoom
Category Artwork (Digital) / Miscellaneous
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 800 x 533px
File Size 119.7 kB
Not to put a damper on the picture, but if that's a traditional Japanese 'onsen' (hot spring tub) then the towels should never hit the water, but I see their use in covering up certain parts XP
Really stunning picture. IMO, this is one of the best I've seen from you. Can't wait to see more!
Really stunning picture. IMO, this is one of the best I've seen from you. Can't wait to see more!
This piece came out really nice =) as you said, the only thing that really could use some work is the water.
It looks very transparent and placid, which isn't a bad thing when it's a glass of water on a table, but onsens normally have minerals and stuff in the water right? At the very least, it's heated, which adds bubbles into the water, so the water should be a little cloudy at least. Doing ripples, I imagine, would be even harder than that, as water is very difficult to render properly.
Another thing I noticed, which is very minor, would be the material covering the entryway into the bath. There doesn't look to be a color change to me to indicate the light is passing through two layers of the material; it's a constant from the end of one door to the end of the other.
I do like all the extra touches, with the plants and the bamboo poking out around the rocks. Gives it more a feeling of an open-air bath than an indoor one. I also love the drippy water all over Fran and Aira here, that's a very nice effect =)
It looks very transparent and placid, which isn't a bad thing when it's a glass of water on a table, but onsens normally have minerals and stuff in the water right? At the very least, it's heated, which adds bubbles into the water, so the water should be a little cloudy at least. Doing ripples, I imagine, would be even harder than that, as water is very difficult to render properly.
Another thing I noticed, which is very minor, would be the material covering the entryway into the bath. There doesn't look to be a color change to me to indicate the light is passing through two layers of the material; it's a constant from the end of one door to the end of the other.
I do like all the extra touches, with the plants and the bamboo poking out around the rocks. Gives it more a feeling of an open-air bath than an indoor one. I also love the drippy water all over Fran and Aira here, that's a very nice effect =)
Ah, thanks very much!
I figured the water needed a lot more work, I didn't really have much idea of what I was doing when I got to it. Now that you mention it though, I can see that the water should really be somewhat cloudy since it'll be so warm. The ripples probably wouldn't be too much more work from there.
Also, that entryway. I'm kind of surprised that I managed not to make the light coming through it fainter. I can put that down to me working on it for hours before getting to that point, but I can really say that as an excuse either. I did fade it to a slight extent, but clearly not enough to be noticable at all. I certainly can't tell anymore. Something to look out for next time.
As for the rocks and bamboo, I wanted to give that classic onsen feel to it all. Good to know that came through alright.
Thanks very much for the critique!
I figured the water needed a lot more work, I didn't really have much idea of what I was doing when I got to it. Now that you mention it though, I can see that the water should really be somewhat cloudy since it'll be so warm. The ripples probably wouldn't be too much more work from there.
Also, that entryway. I'm kind of surprised that I managed not to make the light coming through it fainter. I can put that down to me working on it for hours before getting to that point, but I can really say that as an excuse either. I did fade it to a slight extent, but clearly not enough to be noticable at all. I certainly can't tell anymore. Something to look out for next time.
As for the rocks and bamboo, I wanted to give that classic onsen feel to it all. Good to know that came through alright.
Thanks very much for the critique!
Oh, it's noticeable that the light is faded coming through the doors, but the material overlaps for most of it and should be.. I dunno, doubly faint? That sounds weird, but yeah...
I think the water would look fine just clouded a little, so it doesn't look like they're trapped in glass or something =P
And you asked for a critique, so I thought I'd weigh in on this stunning piece =) It's overall very beautiful
I think the water would look fine just clouded a little, so it doesn't look like they're trapped in glass or something =P
And you asked for a critique, so I thought I'd weigh in on this stunning piece =) It's overall very beautiful
Nah, I don't think this warrants a Mature warning since nothing is show and is hardly even implied.
I LOVE the detail you went into here :D The water droplets, the shadows and highlights, the steam, everything. The characters' expressions are done really well, too! Fran continues to draw my attention, hehe.
I LOVE the detail you went into here :D The water droplets, the shadows and highlights, the steam, everything. The characters' expressions are done really well, too! Fran continues to draw my attention, hehe.
Wow, i knew that you would do a great job with Aira and this scene for the story i wrote, i am extremely happy that i did my first story trade with you, mainly after seeing how well your half came out, it kinda makes me wonder if my half was good enough to warrant such great work.
mmm i've always loved this scenario. i know that most guys get off on the idea of girl on girl because it's more boobs and butts to stare at but i've always liked the romantic aspect of it. girls tend to be more sensitive then guys and i would imagine that girl furs would be even more so. So this situation is very tender and you've portraded it perfectly. good job.
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