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So after my first two attempts at a Sweetie Belle fic ending in pure crap.
I made this one which I find to be much more satisfying.
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I made this one which I find to be much more satisfying.
Art from
prettypinkpony
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Horse
Size 116 x 120px
File Size 76.5 kB
Listed in Folders
Well, tell you what. THIS story is a masterpiece.
The doll thoing was actually very original, and even though I'd personally be a little stunned upon being just a lil clone of myself...
I'm glad Rarity didn't mind it^^
You've created a ver nice story, and you should be proud of yourself!
The doll thoing was actually very original, and even though I'd personally be a little stunned upon being just a lil clone of myself...
I'm glad Rarity didn't mind it^^
You've created a ver nice story, and you should be proud of yourself!
I kinda hope no one reads the comments first because I was hoping that would be a twist for the reader that they dont see coming.
But she had to not mind it. Its in her memories of making the clone for Sweetie Belle, to find out she was the clone instead and have a problem with that would make for bad personality writing.
But she had to not mind it. Its in her memories of making the clone for Sweetie Belle, to find out she was the clone instead and have a problem with that would make for bad personality writing.
Yeah, I'm sure people don't read comments just for that cause!
You know... people spoil a lot in comments section.
Anyway, you made a preety great job indeed!
The problem with clones is the actual location of your sentient self. You can hope for the doll to have seperate mind, or Your becoming one.
That motive never get boring :P Och, and since it's a very nice Tame story (you know... no actual "kinky" stuff said), have you tought about putting it somewhere?
Like, outside of FA?
You know... people spoil a lot in comments section.
Anyway, you made a preety great job indeed!
The problem with clones is the actual location of your sentient self. You can hope for the doll to have seperate mind, or Your becoming one.
That motive never get boring :P Och, and since it's a very nice Tame story (you know... no actual "kinky" stuff said), have you tought about putting it somewhere?
Like, outside of FA?
Yeah I tried to keep it a secret, I left little hints like recommended by another writer so that some of the more focused readers might be able to pick up on it by Sweetie Belle certainty to Rarity's purpose while still having the feeling that her childish mind is getting in the way.
It was fun to write something that wasn't just full of fetishes for once... Last couple of Sweetie Belle fics were terrible.
It was fun to write something that wasn't just full of fetishes for once... Last couple of Sweetie Belle fics were terrible.
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