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Shinka and Deviosis expected to be gaining a partnership together when they went to the forest between their territories, what that didn't expect was a third hypnosis with ideas of her own...
I hope you all enjoy, I would love to hear what you all think! ^w^
Shinka the Mew, a powerful Pokemon with strong hypnotic powers. He had been making plans as of late, plans that would improve his hold over the territories of the world. As of late, rumors of a Malamar by the name of Deviosis had come to attention. The Malamar had apparently been enslaving a number of Pokemon for his own amusement.
Usually Shinka would attempt to underturn an upstart hypnotist, enslaving their will to his own so that he might pervade over the other hypnotist’s territory. But the thought had come to mind of instead using the Pokemon to further his own gains, so he had invited the other hypnotist to a forest far away from his own home so that no bystanders might see their powers in play.
Being late though was inexcusable in Shinka’s opinion; he was of the mindset that one should always be on time to a preorganized meeting, if not a bit early. The Mew had been sitting there, waiting for over an hour for the other Pokemon. “Where could he possibly be?!” the Mew hissed, ripping out a pocket watch from his jacket and glaring at the ticking hand as if to make it go faster. “I organized this meeting over an hour ago, and he’s still not here!”
Shinka folded his arms, biting his lip in anger as he looked around to see if anyone was approaching him in the sparse jungle. “I’m going to give this, Deviosis a piece of my mind!” The Mew was completely enraged, in his anger he ripped a tree from the ground and tossed it at a grazing Tauros, shocking the poor Pokemon as he got overturned.
“Shouldn’t he know better than to enrage a hypnotist?!” Shinka murmured to himself.
“Yes, yes I should,” Deviosis said as he stepped out from behind a tree, his face twisted into a wide grin. “I apologize for my tardiness, there was a bit of business that I needed to attend with one of my slaves. They decided to attempt to retake their free will,” his eyes flashed as he spoke, “I put an end to that.”
Feeling a tad bit embarrassed for throwing a temper tantrum, Shinka coughed and patted down his fine jacket. “Yes, well. You could’ve sent a servant to inform me of your late arrival.”
Deviosis chuckled as he looked over the other hypnotist. “That isn’t my style, I arrive exactly when I want to. It’s none of your concern if I’m late or not.”
Shinka’s eyes flashed with anger, but he was able to contain his rage. “Anyways, to the matter at hand,” he said, taking a moment to calm himself. “As you know, we are both capable hypnotists.”
“Indeed,” Deviosis said, his expression showing nothing about the comment.
“Usually, I would mock the effort of attempting to reason with another hypnotist and just enslave them outright, but with you... with you, I feel it would be of benefit to us both to have one another as perfectly able Pokemon,” Shinka explained, seeing a flash of interest appear in the Malamar’s eyes.
“Yes, I could see the interest in this exploit,” Deviosis said, his smile apparent.
Shinka nodded, the Mew being careful not to drop his guard. If at any point he believed the other Pokemon to attempt to betray him, well he would blast the hypnosis right back with a reflect. “So, would you agree that we might work together to expand our borders. If I’m to understand correctly, as of late many new hypnotists have been trying to move into our adjacent territories. I’m sure that it would be of great interest for us to expand together into these areas,” Shinka offered.
Deviosis rubbed his chin for a moment, contemplating the offer. Usually he would also invoke his hypnosis on amateurs, but this offer would make things much easier. Not having to command a slave, and instead having an ally would be of great help. “This could be a feasible plan,” he commented, not quite willing to devote to the plan just yet. “Just what might it entail?”
“We would split up any territory as we see fit, if one benefits more in one territory than the other gets more in another,” Shinka explained, having anticipated this very question earlier.
“Hm... seems fair,” the Malamar said, he was thinking over everything that might benefit him in some way. “Would there be a certain split on slaves? We would be hypnotizing many Pokemon, and I’m not quite sure if that would be an equal split.”
Shinka nodded a few times, thinking it over. “We can likely split up the draw by deciding through weight factors, perhaps the larger one slave is, the more small Pokemon the other person gets.”
Deviosis nodded, “Alright, well it appears that we have a deal. Indeed, I will be enslaving many Pokemon easily for this alliance.”
Shinka froze, he felt insulted by the answer. “I do believe you mean, I will be earning us more Pokemon. For I am in fact, the more powerful of the two of us.”
But Deviosis was well inclined, not to agree. “I’m sorry to say, my Mew compatriot. But I have far more experience in hypnosis than you, for I am bred to be a powerful hypnotist. You are, excuse my phrasing, an ametuer compared to my power. Why if I were to try hypnotizing you when I was a baby, I could do so in a moment. Now, I am far out of your power range. It would unfair to place yourself against I.”
Shinka was shaking with rage as he heard the pompous Pokemon’s self indulgence. “Well, is that a fact?” Shinka asked, his eye twitching in rage.
“Yes, yes it is.” Deviosis said, his body going tense as he felt a power start to run over the Mew’s body.
Likewise, Shinka felt power growing in Deviosis. It was apparent that the two were about to let out extremely powerful hypnosis, and already small Pokemon in the nearby woods were falling over in hypnotic trance from the two. As their power rose, and their intentions for hypnosis were made clear, a voice rang out through the air.
The powerful pair didn’t hear it for a moment, blood pumping in their ears which drowned out the sound. But as the voice rose high, it pierced the pair’s self conceived deafness. It was some of the most beautiful singing they’d ever heard, all rage and anger was washed away as they listened to the rise and fall of the soprano voice.
Shinka was the first to realize the meaning behind the singing. “H... hypnosis...” He murmured, it was obvious that the music was a very powerful form of hypnosis. The pair was too far into the lull of the music by the time they realized the effects, and there was no time to cover their ears.
From the shrubbery a form appeared. “Meloetta...” They both muttered, but they couldn’t move and their minds were slowing to a halt as the musical hypnosis affected their ability to think straight.
Swirls appeared in their eyes as she grew closer, her hypnosis affected by how far she was from her intended target. By the time Meloetta was next to the pair, they were completely under her power. “Do you hear me?” she asked.
The pair nodded, their eyes swirling green and black. “Good boys,” she said, and their faces twisted into pleased smiles at being complemented by the hypnotic siren. “So, I’ve finally got you two under my control. I’ve had my eyes on you for quite some time...” Meloetta explained as she walked around, looking at the hypnotized pair. “Do you know why I hypnotized you two?”
“No...” the pair murmured in monotone voices, completely under her spell.
“Well, it’s quite simple,” Meloetta said, a self satisfied smirk on her face. “I’ve been needing hypnotists under my control, hypnotists who aren’t any amateurs. But really powerful ones, and so when I heard of this little meeting from one of my newest minions, well... I really can’t let this chance slip away.”
Neither Shinka nor Deviosis could move, their minds were completely in the thrall of the hypnotic singer. They both had a consciousness that most other hypnotized Pokemon didn’t have, but that wasn’t enough to save them. “So, I think it’s about time to show you two that I really own you now,” Moletta giggled, she gestured towards Shinka. “You are no longer Shinka, you are now Shinky.”
Shinky grinned, his mistress had given him the perfect name. “Deviosis, you are no longer such. You are now Devi.”
Devi shivered with happiness at having been renamed by his mistress, he was glad to have been enslaved by such a gorgeous singer. “My pair of hypnotized hypnotists, from now on you are my slaves. Completely under my thrall, but you will keep your intelligence. I need you two to keep your areas running while claiming the territories of the world under my name, do you understand?”
“Yes mistress,” the hypnotized duo said, they were completely in love with their mistress, nothing could sway them otherwise.
“Good, now as you both understand. I am far more powerful than either of you, isn’t that correct?” Moletta asked.
“Indeed mistress,” both said without a moment’s hesitation, when they had been with free minds they would’ve argued this fact, but now they were enslaved by the powerful Meloetta and there was no way they would argue with their new mistress.
“Good, now go back home and tell all of your slaves that they belong to me.” Meloetta said before walking off into the forest; she knew that they would know by heart where she was at all times.
“Yes mistress.”
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The pair of slaves indeed went home, and on informing their slaves of their new ownership they were completely happy to watch a number of them walk away to live with their new mistress. Shinka grinned as he watched the last of his slaves leave. “Great! Now, it’s time to find some more slaves for mistress!”
The Mew floated out of his house, completely happy with the new life that had been forced upon him.
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notmolo

Shinka and Deviosis expected to be gaining a partnership together when they went to the forest between their territories, what that didn't expect was a third hypnosis with ideas of her own...
I hope you all enjoy, I would love to hear what you all think! ^w^
Shinka the Mew, a powerful Pokemon with strong hypnotic powers. He had been making plans as of late, plans that would improve his hold over the territories of the world. As of late, rumors of a Malamar by the name of Deviosis had come to attention. The Malamar had apparently been enslaving a number of Pokemon for his own amusement.
Usually Shinka would attempt to underturn an upstart hypnotist, enslaving their will to his own so that he might pervade over the other hypnotist’s territory. But the thought had come to mind of instead using the Pokemon to further his own gains, so he had invited the other hypnotist to a forest far away from his own home so that no bystanders might see their powers in play.
Being late though was inexcusable in Shinka’s opinion; he was of the mindset that one should always be on time to a preorganized meeting, if not a bit early. The Mew had been sitting there, waiting for over an hour for the other Pokemon. “Where could he possibly be?!” the Mew hissed, ripping out a pocket watch from his jacket and glaring at the ticking hand as if to make it go faster. “I organized this meeting over an hour ago, and he’s still not here!”
Shinka folded his arms, biting his lip in anger as he looked around to see if anyone was approaching him in the sparse jungle. “I’m going to give this, Deviosis a piece of my mind!” The Mew was completely enraged, in his anger he ripped a tree from the ground and tossed it at a grazing Tauros, shocking the poor Pokemon as he got overturned.
“Shouldn’t he know better than to enrage a hypnotist?!” Shinka murmured to himself.
“Yes, yes I should,” Deviosis said as he stepped out from behind a tree, his face twisted into a wide grin. “I apologize for my tardiness, there was a bit of business that I needed to attend with one of my slaves. They decided to attempt to retake their free will,” his eyes flashed as he spoke, “I put an end to that.”
Feeling a tad bit embarrassed for throwing a temper tantrum, Shinka coughed and patted down his fine jacket. “Yes, well. You could’ve sent a servant to inform me of your late arrival.”
Deviosis chuckled as he looked over the other hypnotist. “That isn’t my style, I arrive exactly when I want to. It’s none of your concern if I’m late or not.”
Shinka’s eyes flashed with anger, but he was able to contain his rage. “Anyways, to the matter at hand,” he said, taking a moment to calm himself. “As you know, we are both capable hypnotists.”
“Indeed,” Deviosis said, his expression showing nothing about the comment.
“Usually, I would mock the effort of attempting to reason with another hypnotist and just enslave them outright, but with you... with you, I feel it would be of benefit to us both to have one another as perfectly able Pokemon,” Shinka explained, seeing a flash of interest appear in the Malamar’s eyes.
“Yes, I could see the interest in this exploit,” Deviosis said, his smile apparent.
Shinka nodded, the Mew being careful not to drop his guard. If at any point he believed the other Pokemon to attempt to betray him, well he would blast the hypnosis right back with a reflect. “So, would you agree that we might work together to expand our borders. If I’m to understand correctly, as of late many new hypnotists have been trying to move into our adjacent territories. I’m sure that it would be of great interest for us to expand together into these areas,” Shinka offered.
Deviosis rubbed his chin for a moment, contemplating the offer. Usually he would also invoke his hypnosis on amateurs, but this offer would make things much easier. Not having to command a slave, and instead having an ally would be of great help. “This could be a feasible plan,” he commented, not quite willing to devote to the plan just yet. “Just what might it entail?”
“We would split up any territory as we see fit, if one benefits more in one territory than the other gets more in another,” Shinka explained, having anticipated this very question earlier.
“Hm... seems fair,” the Malamar said, he was thinking over everything that might benefit him in some way. “Would there be a certain split on slaves? We would be hypnotizing many Pokemon, and I’m not quite sure if that would be an equal split.”
Shinka nodded a few times, thinking it over. “We can likely split up the draw by deciding through weight factors, perhaps the larger one slave is, the more small Pokemon the other person gets.”
Deviosis nodded, “Alright, well it appears that we have a deal. Indeed, I will be enslaving many Pokemon easily for this alliance.”
Shinka froze, he felt insulted by the answer. “I do believe you mean, I will be earning us more Pokemon. For I am in fact, the more powerful of the two of us.”
But Deviosis was well inclined, not to agree. “I’m sorry to say, my Mew compatriot. But I have far more experience in hypnosis than you, for I am bred to be a powerful hypnotist. You are, excuse my phrasing, an ametuer compared to my power. Why if I were to try hypnotizing you when I was a baby, I could do so in a moment. Now, I am far out of your power range. It would unfair to place yourself against I.”
Shinka was shaking with rage as he heard the pompous Pokemon’s self indulgence. “Well, is that a fact?” Shinka asked, his eye twitching in rage.
“Yes, yes it is.” Deviosis said, his body going tense as he felt a power start to run over the Mew’s body.
Likewise, Shinka felt power growing in Deviosis. It was apparent that the two were about to let out extremely powerful hypnosis, and already small Pokemon in the nearby woods were falling over in hypnotic trance from the two. As their power rose, and their intentions for hypnosis were made clear, a voice rang out through the air.
The powerful pair didn’t hear it for a moment, blood pumping in their ears which drowned out the sound. But as the voice rose high, it pierced the pair’s self conceived deafness. It was some of the most beautiful singing they’d ever heard, all rage and anger was washed away as they listened to the rise and fall of the soprano voice.
Shinka was the first to realize the meaning behind the singing. “H... hypnosis...” He murmured, it was obvious that the music was a very powerful form of hypnosis. The pair was too far into the lull of the music by the time they realized the effects, and there was no time to cover their ears.
From the shrubbery a form appeared. “Meloetta...” They both muttered, but they couldn’t move and their minds were slowing to a halt as the musical hypnosis affected their ability to think straight.
Swirls appeared in their eyes as she grew closer, her hypnosis affected by how far she was from her intended target. By the time Meloetta was next to the pair, they were completely under her power. “Do you hear me?” she asked.
The pair nodded, their eyes swirling green and black. “Good boys,” she said, and their faces twisted into pleased smiles at being complemented by the hypnotic siren. “So, I’ve finally got you two under my control. I’ve had my eyes on you for quite some time...” Meloetta explained as she walked around, looking at the hypnotized pair. “Do you know why I hypnotized you two?”
“No...” the pair murmured in monotone voices, completely under her spell.
“Well, it’s quite simple,” Meloetta said, a self satisfied smirk on her face. “I’ve been needing hypnotists under my control, hypnotists who aren’t any amateurs. But really powerful ones, and so when I heard of this little meeting from one of my newest minions, well... I really can’t let this chance slip away.”
Neither Shinka nor Deviosis could move, their minds were completely in the thrall of the hypnotic singer. They both had a consciousness that most other hypnotized Pokemon didn’t have, but that wasn’t enough to save them. “So, I think it’s about time to show you two that I really own you now,” Moletta giggled, she gestured towards Shinka. “You are no longer Shinka, you are now Shinky.”
Shinky grinned, his mistress had given him the perfect name. “Deviosis, you are no longer such. You are now Devi.”
Devi shivered with happiness at having been renamed by his mistress, he was glad to have been enslaved by such a gorgeous singer. “My pair of hypnotized hypnotists, from now on you are my slaves. Completely under my thrall, but you will keep your intelligence. I need you two to keep your areas running while claiming the territories of the world under my name, do you understand?”
“Yes mistress,” the hypnotized duo said, they were completely in love with their mistress, nothing could sway them otherwise.
“Good, now as you both understand. I am far more powerful than either of you, isn’t that correct?” Moletta asked.
“Indeed mistress,” both said without a moment’s hesitation, when they had been with free minds they would’ve argued this fact, but now they were enslaved by the powerful Meloetta and there was no way they would argue with their new mistress.
“Good, now go back home and tell all of your slaves that they belong to me.” Meloetta said before walking off into the forest; she knew that they would know by heart where she was at all times.
“Yes mistress.”
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The pair of slaves indeed went home, and on informing their slaves of their new ownership they were completely happy to watch a number of them walk away to live with their new mistress. Shinka grinned as he watched the last of his slaves leave. “Great! Now, it’s time to find some more slaves for mistress!”
The Mew floated out of his house, completely happy with the new life that had been forced upon him.
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Category Story / Pokemon
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Say. meloetta is Suppose to be a Milotic correct¿ I asked because I reread over and could not find proof to otherwise. Maybe I missed a line Anyways, if she is a Milotic, would she not Slide or Slither of and away rather than walk? Just something I noticed.
Other than that, I kind of like this Story. It shows just how unstable and easily changed the Hypnotist Hierarchy can be manipulated or changed, and I kind of like the idea of two hypnotist trying to sort out their rivalry and work together, even if that Alliance is doomed to fall by simple design.~
An enjoyable read ^^
Other than that, I kind of like this Story. It shows just how unstable and easily changed the Hypnotist Hierarchy can be manipulated or changed, and I kind of like the idea of two hypnotist trying to sort out their rivalry and work together, even if that Alliance is doomed to fall by simple design.~
An enjoyable read ^^
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