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ive been working on this head for over a year now ( yes a year cause it made me angry) it is supposed to be b-rabbit from pandora hearts but the head is not turning out right and i cant figure out how to fix it when its done it will be a full fursuit with a moving mouth and L.E.D eyes but i cannot move forward until i figure out what to do with the head mainly the mouth it kinda looks like a turtle witch is not at all what im aiming for
Category Other / Anime
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 720 x 960px
File Size 162.4 kB
Okies, here we go.
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2.....ae-d743ax6.jpg
I didn't actually see much wrong with the actual shape, but there where some things that stood out. The eyebrows is a little too prominent, this is just a style thing, but bunnies have a general smooth and round headshape, so that migth be what is throwing it off a bit. The curve from the head to the muzzle is a little sudden, just some minor curving will help soften it out.
And the last thing is that the cheeks are a bit far back and higher up on one side than the other. Other than that it's just smoothing the edges.
And I think the turtle look will go away when you add the ears :) they do have the same general shape of the head, only that turtles are more square'ish. so smoothing out and ears will fix that right up :)
This is all just personal opinion ofc, but I hope It can be of some help ^^;
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2.....ae-d743ax6.jpg
I didn't actually see much wrong with the actual shape, but there where some things that stood out. The eyebrows is a little too prominent, this is just a style thing, but bunnies have a general smooth and round headshape, so that migth be what is throwing it off a bit. The curve from the head to the muzzle is a little sudden, just some minor curving will help soften it out.
And the last thing is that the cheeks are a bit far back and higher up on one side than the other. Other than that it's just smoothing the edges.
And I think the turtle look will go away when you add the ears :) they do have the same general shape of the head, only that turtles are more square'ish. so smoothing out and ears will fix that right up :)
This is all just personal opinion ofc, but I hope It can be of some help ^^;
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