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More from heartsong
and again.
more random shower inspired thoughts.
....i need to find a better place to think.
more random shower inspired thoughts.
....i need to find a better place to think.
Category Poetry / Miscellaneous
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 87px
File Size 20.5 kB
That has elements of greatness, and good approximate meter, too. Particularly as something that came to you spontaneously, awesome. A few of the turns of phrase are slightly cliched or stretch idea a bit for the sake of rhyme, but. You know. That's the very stuff our poetries are made off. ^_^
Nice work!
Nice work!
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