
A character lineup for a cartoon I'll be pitching around soon. ©2008 Kyle A Carrozza
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I heard about this sick fucker and his pedo shenanigans recently, so I'm just gonna pop in and take a piss.
Honestly, I think this character lineup looks really jumbled. The roster just looks very random, I don't really get how any of these guys are supposed to interact with each other in the same setting [ with the exception of Master Omai, I can tell he's related to Darkblade ]
Really, what even is the premise of this pitch supposed to be? Is it a sci-fi show? Fantasy adventure? Does it involve time travel or something? [ that could explain why everyone is anachronistic, with no consistent time period ]
It's something that I noticed with a lot of Kyle's pitches. It seems like he takes a Mad Libs approach to his ideas, where he just picks a bunch of random things from a hat and smashes them together with the hope that the show will seem "zany".
To be fair, I will admit that the character designs are pretty good on their own - except for Darkblade himself, that is. I hate the lime green shirt he has, it sticks out like a sore thumb and simply does not mesh with the rest of his color scheme at all. Aside from that, the other characters would look perfectly fine if they were placed in a setting that actually fit them.
But oh well, it's not like my criticism is gonna make much difference regardless. Pedozza's in the slammer and he's never gonna make a cartoon again, which is for the best for everyone else.
Honestly, I think this character lineup looks really jumbled. The roster just looks very random, I don't really get how any of these guys are supposed to interact with each other in the same setting [ with the exception of Master Omai, I can tell he's related to Darkblade ]
Really, what even is the premise of this pitch supposed to be? Is it a sci-fi show? Fantasy adventure? Does it involve time travel or something? [ that could explain why everyone is anachronistic, with no consistent time period ]
It's something that I noticed with a lot of Kyle's pitches. It seems like he takes a Mad Libs approach to his ideas, where he just picks a bunch of random things from a hat and smashes them together with the hope that the show will seem "zany".
To be fair, I will admit that the character designs are pretty good on their own - except for Darkblade himself, that is. I hate the lime green shirt he has, it sticks out like a sore thumb and simply does not mesh with the rest of his color scheme at all. Aside from that, the other characters would look perfectly fine if they were placed in a setting that actually fit them.
But oh well, it's not like my criticism is gonna make much difference regardless. Pedozza's in the slammer and he's never gonna make a cartoon again, which is for the best for everyone else.
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