this is a short story I wrote back when I first joined FA. If you dont mind I'd love input on teh story. does it sound good, does it need fixing, taht kinda stuff. I'm not really sure how good it is so for now I'm only gonna put out a chapeter at a time and only as one or two at a time. The entire idea is some kid waking up as a fur one day. I hope you enjoy it

(seriously, whatever critisizm you have, I can take it)