I've always been fascinated by this kind of form. Specific rules like Haiku, or something like this- sort of a "say-more-and-more-with-less-and-less" form. I especially liked this one.
Oh? :) At first, I would have said it was "hopeful," but now you mention it, there is a good amount of longing and wistfulness to it, so I could see that too.
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