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Here's a decent gameplay vid, EDGE's biggest gimmick is that you can hang your cube on a wall by tilting it toward it, trying to roll up the wall. This gives you "EDGE time" which is time not counted toward your total level time, and also lets you ride moving walls around.
I don't know whether you only want people to comment how creative and good looking this is, but here I go:
Visual quality:
1) The edges look unpleasant when they should look razor sharp in images like that, it's too aliased.
2) There are some small spaces where little dents protrude that simply look like mistakes/oversights.
Like where the big white platform "melts" in the triangles/blocks, there are those two little dents. Some more are where the 18 triangle groups "connect" to the main body.
What's with where a bit of the main body is missing in the right upper corner where the four triangles are?
Generally, the image is lacking consistency:
1) you are using multiple triangle sizes for no apparent reason
2) margins between similarly related elements have different widths across the image
3) some elements do not follow the "grid" and "invisible lines" that are created by the majority of similar elements of the same "group"
Visual quality:
1) The edges look unpleasant when they should look razor sharp in images like that, it's too aliased.
2) There are some small spaces where little dents protrude that simply look like mistakes/oversights.
Like where the big white platform "melts" in the triangles/blocks, there are those two little dents. Some more are where the 18 triangle groups "connect" to the main body.
What's with where a bit of the main body is missing in the right upper corner where the four triangles are?
Generally, the image is lacking consistency:
1) you are using multiple triangle sizes for no apparent reason
2) margins between similarly related elements have different widths across the image
3) some elements do not follow the "grid" and "invisible lines" that are created by the majority of similar elements of the same "group"
Visual quality:
1. The actual image is re-sized due to it being a gif
2. The dents are there to be like that to show that it isn't perfect shape because maybe it's a rock? maybe it's how the eye or the viewer is seeing it
Generally, the image is lacking consistency:
1) Actually no... The triangles are same size buddy.. I know because the program doesn't change the size...
2) ... I am not even going to comment on that one.
3) This was built on a grid... and only follows the "grid"...
I don't know who made you king of shape art- and we are all giving our opinion here-
but this was something I feel shouldn't be judged on its "visual quality" it should be judged on the the imagination of the viewer- and so far as it seems you don't have a very broad imagination.. because sometimes art isn't perfect and you half to use your brain to come up with what isn't or is there.
1. The actual image is re-sized due to it being a gif
2. The dents are there to be like that to show that it isn't perfect shape because maybe it's a rock? maybe it's how the eye or the viewer is seeing it
Generally, the image is lacking consistency:
1) Actually no... The triangles are same size buddy.. I know because the program doesn't change the size...
2) ... I am not even going to comment on that one.
3) This was built on a grid... and only follows the "grid"...
I don't know who made you king of shape art- and we are all giving our opinion here-
but this was something I feel shouldn't be judged on its "visual quality" it should be judged on the the imagination of the viewer- and so far as it seems you don't have a very broad imagination.. because sometimes art isn't perfect and you half to use your brain to come up with what isn't or is there.
I am merely providing my humble opinion as someone working in GUI creation and vector art.
While I am not a designer myself I am working close with experts in digital art and design and enjoy talking with them and learning from them a lot.
All I did was providing some criticism about things that I noticed.
Whether the errors I saw are really errors, whether the criticism I voiced is correct can be easily shown by addressing the points I raised with counter arguments or explanations.
A grown up community should be able to do that, otherwise those inflationary used positive opinions have no value because there are no negative or neutral opinions allowed that you can use as measuring stick.
Criticism is not meant as a personal insult and you should not perceive it as such.
If it is correct learn and grow through it, if it is unfounded or simply wrong ignore it or debate it.
DON'T WORRY:
I will never make any "negative" comment on FF again, I will never voice any criticism again.
As insulting as it is, call me a troll or asshole, I will not respond anymore nor will I provide another opportunity to call me that.
It's a tad bit sad, but so be it.
While I am not a designer myself I am working close with experts in digital art and design and enjoy talking with them and learning from them a lot.
All I did was providing some criticism about things that I noticed.
Whether the errors I saw are really errors, whether the criticism I voiced is correct can be easily shown by addressing the points I raised with counter arguments or explanations.
A grown up community should be able to do that, otherwise those inflationary used positive opinions have no value because there are no negative or neutral opinions allowed that you can use as measuring stick.
Criticism is not meant as a personal insult and you should not perceive it as such.
If it is correct learn and grow through it, if it is unfounded or simply wrong ignore it or debate it.
DON'T WORRY:
I will never make any "negative" comment on FF again, I will never voice any criticism again.
As insulting as it is, call me a troll or asshole, I will not respond anymore nor will I provide another opportunity to call me that.
It's a tad bit sad, but so be it.
Okay,
This.. This is gold...
Because people didn't accept your advice and say "Hey, yeah maybe you have a point" you get upset? and play passive aggressive? Then pull the card that I can not voice my opinion and if I do and "try" to give constructive thought that my voice will be shot down- as "DON'T WORRY: I will never make any "negative" comment on FF again, I will never voice any criticism again. As insulting as it is, call me a troll or asshole, I will not respond anymore nor will I provide another opportunity to call me that. It's a tad bit sad, but so be it." That is pretty funny guy...
I explained this to you already.. This isn't supposed to be perfect... and Your GUI and your workings with Vector Art will never change what I intended the actual picture to represent.. And you didn't even give me a positive opinion you just told me what was wrong and assumed I knew what the hell you were talking about. like really "there are those two little dents" "Some more are where the 18 triangle groups" how the hell am I supposed to know what you are talking about. Then we got the fact you didn't explain for me on how to fix them because there are two parts to critique on a "constructive" level as you claim to be fronting... One is making it clear what doesn't look right. Two is actually giving tips. There are a couple of things that I used my general design knowlage to create- like the actual interesting odd numbers and unsymmetrical shapes and sides bring attention to the eye- Let alone again I don't half to explain what I did in this picture to justify why I went against what you desire to look good..
Another thing, You used words like "how creative" "good looking" to start off and it doesn't really sound like you are giving constructive thought it just sounds like you are calling what I did non creative-
I never said you shouldn't comment what you think. I even replied with what I thought.. But, this isn't Vector or GUI this isn't supposed to be a picture of what you believe it to be you even described what I see in it wrongly.. You see it as melting I see it as falling... etc. etc. Point being I don't want to explain this piece... I want it to be imaginative and I was talking to lordwolfie when I saw your comment anyway. Oh, and even more of an insult (To me that is) "A grown up community should be able to do that" That is rude... Just rude... And I believe I gave you an exact counter argument too... I can care less what anyone thinks about this because I did this for fun.. I just know that you are just being rude at this point and I would like and enjoy that you take your internet views somewhere where you can't get butt hurt, because you didn't get the reaction you wanted..
Welcome to The Internet ♥
This.. This is gold...
Because people didn't accept your advice and say "Hey, yeah maybe you have a point" you get upset? and play passive aggressive? Then pull the card that I can not voice my opinion and if I do and "try" to give constructive thought that my voice will be shot down- as "DON'T WORRY: I will never make any "negative" comment on FF again, I will never voice any criticism again. As insulting as it is, call me a troll or asshole, I will not respond anymore nor will I provide another opportunity to call me that. It's a tad bit sad, but so be it." That is pretty funny guy...
I explained this to you already.. This isn't supposed to be perfect... and Your GUI and your workings with Vector Art will never change what I intended the actual picture to represent.. And you didn't even give me a positive opinion you just told me what was wrong and assumed I knew what the hell you were talking about. like really "there are those two little dents" "Some more are where the 18 triangle groups" how the hell am I supposed to know what you are talking about. Then we got the fact you didn't explain for me on how to fix them because there are two parts to critique on a "constructive" level as you claim to be fronting... One is making it clear what doesn't look right. Two is actually giving tips. There are a couple of things that I used my general design knowlage to create- like the actual interesting odd numbers and unsymmetrical shapes and sides bring attention to the eye- Let alone again I don't half to explain what I did in this picture to justify why I went against what you desire to look good..
Another thing, You used words like "how creative" "good looking" to start off and it doesn't really sound like you are giving constructive thought it just sounds like you are calling what I did non creative-
I never said you shouldn't comment what you think. I even replied with what I thought.. But, this isn't Vector or GUI this isn't supposed to be a picture of what you believe it to be you even described what I see in it wrongly.. You see it as melting I see it as falling... etc. etc. Point being I don't want to explain this piece... I want it to be imaginative and I was talking to lordwolfie when I saw your comment anyway. Oh, and even more of an insult (To me that is) "A grown up community should be able to do that" That is rude... Just rude... And I believe I gave you an exact counter argument too... I can care less what anyone thinks about this because I did this for fun.. I just know that you are just being rude at this point and I would like and enjoy that you take your internet views somewhere where you can't get butt hurt, because you didn't get the reaction you wanted..
Welcome to The Internet ♥
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