
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Western Dragon
Size 1123 x 1500px
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It's a "naughty" page... in a sense that the REAL problems are now to begin! XD
Your hero's facial expression in the very first panel is really prizeless and excellent. Well done! It fits to the scene very excellently.
Of course, Draghi is only trying to play or to cuddle again....... ^___^" Good Draghi, good boy. *snickers*
This reminds me... your dragon is more and more the "pet" in your comics. I mean, YES... he HAS ALWAYS BEEN THE PET... and I don't say he is "dumb" or anything like it.
What I'm trying to say is... more and more, you're showing that he's not an equal to your main hero (like a buddy movie), but he's a trusty, loyal pet.
I know, this is what Draghi has been ALL ALONG... but it was never SO strong and obvious than in the last comic pages and artwork.
I think... that you're trying to make it more obvious to the people, so that ANY watcher can understand the relationship between these characters... WITHOUT knowing the entire background universe!!!
This is actually pretty good and helpful. EVERY watcher - new or old - should recongize the relationship here very clearly... without doing much research. ^_^
On the other hand, you're beginning to fill Draghi's facial and body language MORE AND MORE with "pet like" behaviour. That's nice!
Like I said before, Draghi has ALWAYS been the loyal pet... but in my opinion, you are beginning to give your characters more and more "natural" and "accurate" expressions - fitting to their relationship and to your stories.
Oh... something nasty now: is it my imagination or does... did Draghi become more chubby in the past weeks!????? XD
*looks at himself* I need to lose some weight, too. ^^"
And why is the evil narrator so happy that your hero CANNOT solve the issue without any assistance?? XD *grins*
Well, let's see how or if this is going to continue...
Your hero's facial expression in the very first panel is really prizeless and excellent. Well done! It fits to the scene very excellently.
Of course, Draghi is only trying to play or to cuddle again....... ^___^" Good Draghi, good boy. *snickers*
This reminds me... your dragon is more and more the "pet" in your comics. I mean, YES... he HAS ALWAYS BEEN THE PET... and I don't say he is "dumb" or anything like it.
What I'm trying to say is... more and more, you're showing that he's not an equal to your main hero (like a buddy movie), but he's a trusty, loyal pet.
I know, this is what Draghi has been ALL ALONG... but it was never SO strong and obvious than in the last comic pages and artwork.
I think... that you're trying to make it more obvious to the people, so that ANY watcher can understand the relationship between these characters... WITHOUT knowing the entire background universe!!!
This is actually pretty good and helpful. EVERY watcher - new or old - should recongize the relationship here very clearly... without doing much research. ^_^
On the other hand, you're beginning to fill Draghi's facial and body language MORE AND MORE with "pet like" behaviour. That's nice!
Like I said before, Draghi has ALWAYS been the loyal pet... but in my opinion, you are beginning to give your characters more and more "natural" and "accurate" expressions - fitting to their relationship and to your stories.
Oh... something nasty now: is it my imagination or does... did Draghi become more chubby in the past weeks!????? XD
*looks at himself* I need to lose some weight, too. ^^"
And why is the evil narrator so happy that your hero CANNOT solve the issue without any assistance?? XD *grins*
Well, let's see how or if this is going to continue...
I admit I really liked the expression in the first panel. Though when I first saw it after I sketched it... it kind of looked like it would fit with the following text : " Are you mentally challenged?".
And yes, Draghi was always a companion... they are not meant to be equals.... and while technically Draghi IS a pet in all legal terms , I wouldn't want to demote him QUITE that far. Draghi is... deceptively "simple". He is smarter then he looks... but has no need to use his intelligence since he is provided for for all his needs ( he is kept safe, well fed, healthy and entertained. SO troully he is living the life, as they say. There's not much need for him to use his brain much, except when he REALLY wants something. I'm hoping to develop that as the comic goes on. Yet at the same time I did want him to feel like an animal. It's why I didn't let him "talk". He can mimic words ( schooby talk ) and he can understand a fair bit of what he hears, though mostly relating to things he can see touch smell or taste, and particular strong emotions ( since he is empathic ). He also acts on his instincts, and behaves similarly to what you see from dogs or cats or other animals. I wanted to "feel" like a tamed animal, but secretively be more then that ( in real life terms, he can get to be about as intelligent as a young human child... say 4-5 years old? )
See they are supposed to be complementary characters. They are each other's polar opposite. Draghi is large strong, happy, enthusiastic, but reckless, easily swayed by emotion, deceived and so on. Jon on the other hand is small and weak physically, he is calculated, and aware of things around him, but also cold, broody and bored with everything round him.
They both have their positives and negatives, but are supposed to complement one another perfectly. That's how I imagined them.
Also, yes Draghi has gained some weight. I will admit... those curves look good on him. ( plus he's MUCH easier to draw that way ) .
Also the narrator is evil because... I guess because he can. Still pondering weather I should make the narrator a reoccurring character... or just make him in to a plot device when something needs to happen and wouldn't under normally believable circumstances.
ANd you can bet it will continue ( unless i die tomorrow... I haven't planned on doing that though ).
And yes, Draghi was always a companion... they are not meant to be equals.... and while technically Draghi IS a pet in all legal terms , I wouldn't want to demote him QUITE that far. Draghi is... deceptively "simple". He is smarter then he looks... but has no need to use his intelligence since he is provided for for all his needs ( he is kept safe, well fed, healthy and entertained. SO troully he is living the life, as they say. There's not much need for him to use his brain much, except when he REALLY wants something. I'm hoping to develop that as the comic goes on. Yet at the same time I did want him to feel like an animal. It's why I didn't let him "talk". He can mimic words ( schooby talk ) and he can understand a fair bit of what he hears, though mostly relating to things he can see touch smell or taste, and particular strong emotions ( since he is empathic ). He also acts on his instincts, and behaves similarly to what you see from dogs or cats or other animals. I wanted to "feel" like a tamed animal, but secretively be more then that ( in real life terms, he can get to be about as intelligent as a young human child... say 4-5 years old? )
See they are supposed to be complementary characters. They are each other's polar opposite. Draghi is large strong, happy, enthusiastic, but reckless, easily swayed by emotion, deceived and so on. Jon on the other hand is small and weak physically, he is calculated, and aware of things around him, but also cold, broody and bored with everything round him.
They both have their positives and negatives, but are supposed to complement one another perfectly. That's how I imagined them.
Also, yes Draghi has gained some weight. I will admit... those curves look good on him. ( plus he's MUCH easier to draw that way ) .
Also the narrator is evil because... I guess because he can. Still pondering weather I should make the narrator a reoccurring character... or just make him in to a plot device when something needs to happen and wouldn't under normally believable circumstances.
ANd you can bet it will continue ( unless i die tomorrow... I haven't planned on doing that though ).
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