here is my half a trade between
Guy Ghoul
of his Gal Ghoul character.
hope you like.
art (C)
Dreaming Geno
character (C)
Guy Ghoul
Guy Ghoulof his Gal Ghoul character.
hope you like.
art (C)
Dreaming Genocharacter (C)
Guy Ghoul
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 800 x 650px
File Size 461.6 kB
Aiyah! I am surprised at this!
How did you do the background? Your choice of tool and colour makes a great fire backdrop, especially considering the black underpainting and the white highlights. My Gal Ghoul forme is looking great, giving that combination of strength and cuteness that distinguishes you! Giving one example, the bulk in the mouth is mixed with that cheery smile. In fact, my whole body has bulk, yet my fur has cheer! You even made my fur all shiny! Plus, you did great with drawing and positioning the vermillion (that is, red-orange) hairs around my body! I also like how you had my tail extend off the screen, giving testimony on how long my tail really is!
There are a few things I should correct here, though:
1. The vermillion hairs are supposed to be on the back of my body. In other words, they are not supposed to go to the front of my face.
2. The warm colours are supposed to be a fire gradient, not a rainbow pattern. Here, if I were to keep the yellow, marigold (that is, yellow-orange), and orange patterns on my belly, I would make my right eye yellow while making my nose, snout, and left eyebrow marigold. I suggest that, next time, you paint the gradient on my underbelly fur first then follow the 'lines' that the different shades form.
3. The toes could benefit from being positioned at the same angle.
Even so, I knew I made a great choice in trading with you! I am still going with my part of the trade!
How did you do the background? Your choice of tool and colour makes a great fire backdrop, especially considering the black underpainting and the white highlights. My Gal Ghoul forme is looking great, giving that combination of strength and cuteness that distinguishes you! Giving one example, the bulk in the mouth is mixed with that cheery smile. In fact, my whole body has bulk, yet my fur has cheer! You even made my fur all shiny! Plus, you did great with drawing and positioning the vermillion (that is, red-orange) hairs around my body! I also like how you had my tail extend off the screen, giving testimony on how long my tail really is!
There are a few things I should correct here, though:
1. The vermillion hairs are supposed to be on the back of my body. In other words, they are not supposed to go to the front of my face.
2. The warm colours are supposed to be a fire gradient, not a rainbow pattern. Here, if I were to keep the yellow, marigold (that is, yellow-orange), and orange patterns on my belly, I would make my right eye yellow while making my nose, snout, and left eyebrow marigold. I suggest that, next time, you paint the gradient on my underbelly fur first then follow the 'lines' that the different shades form.
3. The toes could benefit from being positioned at the same angle.
Even so, I knew I made a great choice in trading with you! I am still going with my part of the trade!
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