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Commission for Pumzie.
This was a challenge through and through, making me rethink a lot of my processes and how I do things. It's still not perfect but I did my best; I'm happy with how it came out. Pumzie wreaking havoc as Jinx from League of Legends.
This was a challenge through and through, making me rethink a lot of my processes and how I do things. It's still not perfect but I did my best; I'm happy with how it came out. Pumzie wreaking havoc as Jinx from League of Legends.
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Species Housecat
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File Size 426.4 kB
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Well, Fluff, gotta say this looks very nearly professional. I know you probably see more mistakes than I do, but your technique here is great. It's really cool to go through your gallery and see the level you were at as far back as your gallery goes to now - inspirational stuff =p. Gives me hope xD.
I think maybe one thing that can be improved in this particular piece is Pumzie's position on the page. She's a little too far the the left for "comfort." Imo, the only "weak" part of this drawing (composition) is probably the easiest for you to fix - the pose itself, the rendering, and your color choices are all pretty awesome.
You could try moving Pumzie further to the right (more aligned with the left 1/3 of the page), and maybe add some elements in the background that lead the viewer's eye toward her. Possibly something to frame the picture closer in the foreground than Pumzie, on the left side of the picture. Just some ideas - would require experimentation.
Once again, otherwise very awesome piece. Definitely fun to watch you still improving all the time!
I think maybe one thing that can be improved in this particular piece is Pumzie's position on the page. She's a little too far the the left for "comfort." Imo, the only "weak" part of this drawing (composition) is probably the easiest for you to fix - the pose itself, the rendering, and your color choices are all pretty awesome.
You could try moving Pumzie further to the right (more aligned with the left 1/3 of the page), and maybe add some elements in the background that lead the viewer's eye toward her. Possibly something to frame the picture closer in the foreground than Pumzie, on the left side of the picture. Just some ideas - would require experimentation.
Once again, otherwise very awesome piece. Definitely fun to watch you still improving all the time!
I agree with this comment... Pumzie is just a bit too much to the left, which is not comfortable to see.
Too much focus on the background, which is not bad, but Pumzie is supposed to be the real focus (Is an ADC, they have to fall first! :U )
But yeah. Great rendering. The colors, lightning and pose, plus all that destruction behind, is badass and amazing.
Too much focus on the background, which is not bad, but Pumzie is supposed to be the real focus (Is an ADC, they have to fall first! :U )
But yeah. Great rendering. The colors, lightning and pose, plus all that destruction behind, is badass and amazing.
That composition was rather intentional, as the idea was to frame it for desktop wallpaper, so leaving a small space between her and the border enough to show her off, but also plenty of room for desktop stuff otherwise. Typically yeah i'd line her up more with the rule of thirds for a cinematic effect, but thanks for all the comments!
Best money ever spent.
Love the intense detail, the tail and rocket launcher gives me the biggest lady boners. With cherries on top. :I
The background blows me away, and your way of rendering Pumzie is by far, one of my favourite ones.
I couldn't ask for a better result. Thanks a lot for doing this, you're the man. <3
Love the intense detail, the tail and rocket launcher gives me the biggest lady boners. With cherries on top. :I
The background blows me away, and your way of rendering Pumzie is by far, one of my favourite ones.
I couldn't ask for a better result. Thanks a lot for doing this, you're the man. <3
This looks amazing, I especially like the way you did the fur on the tail and blending in her colours with the red/yellow light effects
The smoke and explosion effects look really good, I'd say you've outdone yourself c:
What program(s) did you use for this pic, if you don't mind me asking? :3
The smoke and explosion effects look really good, I'd say you've outdone yourself c:
What program(s) did you use for this pic, if you don't mind me asking? :3
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