Naughty Rat in peril. This should be good :)

thanks

echt gut geworden. auch di ePerspektiven ^^

Danke sehr. Perspektiven, vor allem bei Hintergründen sind für mich immer noch schwer zu zeichnen

ist doch gut gelungen. Wirklich gut wie ich finde ^^

Danke sehr. *Verbeug*

bitte doch ^^ mag auch die Felsdetails in den Steinwänden ^^

How long will this comic be ? About how many pages ?

I can´t really say. That depends on dlpeattie´s story

ah, k :D

anyways, looking forward to it! x3

thanks, till next sunday then^^

It seems to be iteresting comic.

Also, I like these little rats on the first two panels :3

This was a little addition of my own and not part of dlpeattie´s storyline

Do be careful, Eternal... wouldn't want to see you at anyone (else's) mercy...

the gods like those kinds of games^^

hoooo I predict its gonna be fun^^

maybe

You know, for a moment I remeber know of assasin creed

fans of the same fashion lable maybe^^

Hi eternal ^^ high big crazy guy who will torture eternal lol

squiek!

Eternal look out!!

a forsaken fate

aahh ur gonna make urself binded i see..-3-

is this not a story for your interest

*glomps you* of course it is! all your storys intrest me! me! i was just saying how adobarle it is when u do s atory of yourself being binded is all~!

squiek! Sorry, me Lady. Eternal will surly find a terrible end if he continues to speak before thinking^^°

its alrighty you silly rodent.i miss read hings alot as wel~!

ohh :)

nod^^

I wonder if torture will be involved here?

danke verbindlichst

Das wird schon^^

Meinen heutigen Stil erreichte ich erst mit 22 Jahren.^^

NO DON"T GO IN THERE!! I..errrr WE CAN"T LOSE YOU NOW! xD lol sorry i'd be screaming that if my fursona were in there be like NOOOO!!! not unless you take me with you xD

the future is clear now...

hehe yeah? x3 sounds likeit is then :P

What will be from this?

Whooooo! I can tell everyone's going to love this comic.

Than I will put 110% effort into it

Photok: Hay out there!? Is that you Eternal!? *A little Po-Matoran has just called out to you from one of the cells and needs you to do something for him.* If you see my friend Raivaitidax would you so kind as to let him know that I've been kidnaped by these creeps and need his help!? Please do this for me!? I'm sick of these thugs exploiting me for my Stone Carving Skills! That is why they captured me! My friend Raivaitidax would be very grateful if you helped save me!

Where can I find him? Do tell and I am off to bring him here

He's back at his office on the island city of Metru Nui! But there's a problem with trying to contact him!? The Dungeon Master took my iPhone away from me and has it locked away some ware in his office! It's down the hall from my cell! If you can get it, you will be able to call him with it! I just that you already know how to use an iPhone!? His number is already programed on it so you just have to press it and it will call his office immediately!

Eternal merges with the shadows. The office is empty. The iPhone is the box next to the door.
Eternal: Modern technology, sigh
After some invaine tries it worked the call was sent

Hafu: Thank you Eternal! :very happy: *picks up the iPhone after Raivaitidax answers.*

Makuta Raivaitidax: Hay there lithe guy! :very happy: It's been quite a while!? I'm happy to hear from you Hafu! :very happy: Say!? Were have you been all of this time!? We missed you back at Po-Metru! Not long before you left, you told us that you made a very important statue for everyone to see and we were all wondering when you'd show it to us!?

Ummm!? About that!? I…kind-a got myself kidnaped and now i'm in a scuzzy-looking dungeon and some very odd-looking Rahi Beasts want me to carve statues for them!? …PLEASE HELP ME!!!? These people here are crazy!! Please get me out-a-here!? It smells bad in here!,The damn guards took my iPhone from me!,And I need some repairs very badly! They took my Kanohi Mask too! I now have to use a potato sack as a mask and it reeks of very old and very moldy potatoes! I have to piss and shit in a bucket! That's what they tell me here!? We Matoran don't pee nor do we ever need to poop!? And what in Mata Nuis Name are they thinking!? Bread and Water!? These guy must not of heard of health foods like meat,veggies,fish,fruit,and hole grains!!? Have they!? And don't even get me started about my nut-job-a-sell-mate!! The guy tries every day to rape me and has no luck at all trying to find just the right hole! HELLO!!! WE MATORAN DON'T HAVE AN ASSHOLE!!! WHAT AM I!!? Some kind of Sexbot to him!!?

O lala. Somebody here really needs some fresh air. Thought this mask was a new fashion style.

And I wittnessed a dialogue that wasn´t supposed for my ears. *Eternal´s cheeks are getting red and turns aside*

http://www.furaffinity.net/full/14729601/ : Long time no see Eternal!? What seems to be the problem!? Is that Hafu in that cell!?

Hafu: Yes it is! Now please get me the hell out of here!!?

Cellmate Bruce: It that time again little metal man! I don't gove a carp if you don't have an ass! I'll just find meself a bloody hole to bugger even if I have to make wone meself!

Hafu: Tutch me one more damn time and I'll take off my potato sack again and scare the crap out you lile I did yesterday night when you tried to rape me!!!

jikes
technology went mad

Finally found the 1st page! This comic of yours looks really great.

thanks a ton^^