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Bright light, flames lit.
Life reborn, death renews.
Shell to feather, egg to wing.
To the sky's one soars, flame on wings.
Observes the land, sky, and waters.
From the mountains above, dives low to the sea.
A beacon to all, shining bright new hope.
All those observe, smiling a new day.
Darkness avoids, shadows hide.
Like a sword shining bright, cuts swiftly though the night.
On winds and swift air, like a star a hope is light.
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Life reborn, death renews.
Shell to feather, egg to wing.
To the sky's one soars, flame on wings.
Observes the land, sky, and waters.
From the mountains above, dives low to the sea.
A beacon to all, shining bright new hope.
All those observe, smiling a new day.
Darkness avoids, shadows hide.
Like a sword shining bright, cuts swiftly though the night.
On winds and swift air, like a star a hope is light.
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Must I say I find this poem pulchritudinous and harmonious.
The verbose masturbation you conveyed in those three eloquently crafted structures weave and give birth to the perfect manifestation of a phoenix. You have captured the beauty and blazing aura it exudes with an intricate mastery.
The length of your poem might be scant, but you sure do overcome this with a well elaborated image placed underneath them.
My commendations.
PS: I cannot help but see how beautiful an antithesis this is to one of my recently spewed stuff ( especially the last structure ). The coincidence is beautiful. Made my day.
The verbose masturbation you conveyed in those three eloquently crafted structures weave and give birth to the perfect manifestation of a phoenix. You have captured the beauty and blazing aura it exudes with an intricate mastery.
The length of your poem might be scant, but you sure do overcome this with a well elaborated image placed underneath them.
My commendations.
PS: I cannot help but see how beautiful an antithesis this is to one of my recently spewed stuff ( especially the last structure ). The coincidence is beautiful. Made my day.
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