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Part four at last... Sorry it took so long, fallen behind on things. Enjoy it and hope you enjoy it.
Told from both Matt and Zeke’s point of view. Matt learns part of the story behind Zeke’s troubled past and we learn more about Matt and about something that happened to him in the past.
I hope no one minds the way I wrote this part, I felt that it would be better to write it this way to give the reader another view point to see the other characters from. Also for those of you who don’t know, Zeke and his dad are from the south. Zeke is a bit calmer and doesn’t have much of an accent but his dad has a heavier accent so that’s why he talks that way. Also I hope that this chapter explains Zeke better, he’s a complex character with a lot of issues to deal with, but hopefully in the future you’ll see just who he really is deep down.
Told from both Matt and Zeke’s point of view. Matt learns part of the story behind Zeke’s troubled past and we learn more about Matt and about something that happened to him in the past.
I hope no one minds the way I wrote this part, I felt that it would be better to write it this way to give the reader another view point to see the other characters from. Also for those of you who don’t know, Zeke and his dad are from the south. Zeke is a bit calmer and doesn’t have much of an accent but his dad has a heavier accent so that’s why he talks that way. Also I hope that this chapter explains Zeke better, he’s a complex character with a lot of issues to deal with, but hopefully in the future you’ll see just who he really is deep down.
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File Size 61.5 kB
oh yea, I've read the previous chapters and loved em. unlike most of the furry stories I've come across, you've done a very good job on character development while keeping the plot moving at a pace that keeps me very interested.
I don't fav many stories because most of em are not very well written and mostly smut, but you definitely made a work of art here, it's beautifully written dude.
I don't fav many stories because most of em are not very well written and mostly smut, but you definitely made a work of art here, it's beautifully written dude.
Just wait, as soon as I get up the next chapters things will slowly start to pick up. Things will be getting more complicated and interesting, and I hope that it doesn't come to be too tedious or boring.
I really try hard to write and make something that people will enjoy so hearing you say that makes me enjoy writing all the more. I hope you don't mind my lack of updates, I'm pretty lazy with this sort of stuff sadly.
I really try hard to write and make something that people will enjoy so hearing you say that makes me enjoy writing all the more. I hope you don't mind my lack of updates, I'm pretty lazy with this sort of stuff sadly.
Too much soul baring? When you've been damaged to a point that the scars remain it doesn't take much to see the soul or for it to be shown. Not real sure what you mean by that but still glad you like where it's going. More's to come as soon as I can find that blasted file... *puts on an explorer's hat and machete to search*
WHAT?! I spent over 2 weeks going through for errors on this thing! *moans* Thanks for telling me I'll have to have someone else look through it it seems. It wasn't in the speech was it though? Because when characters are talking they don't always follow grammar, and this is also told by the character Zeke and Matt so how they tell it may make grammar a bit of a gray area, but I'll still look into it and see what needs to be fixed.
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