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Oh hay. look at that. art!
yes friends, i actually completed a picture for the first time in like, ever.
anyways, not too much to say about this, cyborg fox, bleak city background. and the fact that im super happy with how it turned out. Any feedback is appreciated.
yes friends, i actually completed a picture for the first time in like, ever.
anyways, not too much to say about this, cyborg fox, bleak city background. and the fact that im super happy with how it turned out. Any feedback is appreciated.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 1199 x 1280px
File Size 288.6 kB
Listed in Folders
Oohh. I do enjoy the rather "technologically inclined" types :3c
As someone who's learning herself; and since you've asked for feedback n.n
There are two parts that really stand out to me, first being (and admittedly it's a bit of an obsession with me) is that her hands are a bit undersized. Which is a very easy thing to do! Hands are tricky.
Essenitally, I try to visualize it like this. On average, the human hand when placed against the face with the bottom of the palm touching the chin comfortably, and fingers comfortably extended upwards, will reach almost to the hair line, or, 6/8th's (Approximately!)
And cover roughly one half of the face in width.
(I hope that makes sense!)
The other issue I see; and this one could be related to perspective, but from the front, the "V lines" of her crotch should be a bit lower. I try to visualize a roughly equal triangle from the hip joins, down to the bottom of her vulva. ~ Which, I think you're trying to avoid creasing the leg (and she's shiny, so I would be tempted to do the same!) But, realistically, it's actually okay to put a bit of a crease in the leg, right above the thigh n.n
Now, I'm not trying to be insulting at all. And I feel kinda awkward commenting on a first complete like that! ~ Please, don't feel discouraged <3 I've made exactly the same mistakes and more.
~~ What I do like (Including subject matter of course!) Is, first and fore most, she's got an expression. Fuck yeah! ~ So many people upload totally flat, expressionless characters (I lump a lot of the pro-level artists in this one. There's a reason why my favorite's section is rather eclectic x3). Having a good expression carries a lot in my book. She's got a bit of a chin on her muzzle. This is more personal preference, but I like a bit of the chin bump. Seems to round out images quite well. Think you did a pretty good job with her neck too; that's something I constantly struggle with.
And, this is an important one, you've got a good arm length for her. Humans (in my opnion anyway) have really oddly long arms! ~ We just don't tend to notice it that often because our clothes hide it. And we usually don't keep our arms still that often.
Anyway, hope that helps :3 ~ Feel free to hide the comment if it's irritating to you.
As someone who's learning herself; and since you've asked for feedback n.n
There are two parts that really stand out to me, first being (and admittedly it's a bit of an obsession with me) is that her hands are a bit undersized. Which is a very easy thing to do! Hands are tricky.
Essenitally, I try to visualize it like this. On average, the human hand when placed against the face with the bottom of the palm touching the chin comfortably, and fingers comfortably extended upwards, will reach almost to the hair line, or, 6/8th's (Approximately!)
And cover roughly one half of the face in width.
(I hope that makes sense!)
The other issue I see; and this one could be related to perspective, but from the front, the "V lines" of her crotch should be a bit lower. I try to visualize a roughly equal triangle from the hip joins, down to the bottom of her vulva. ~ Which, I think you're trying to avoid creasing the leg (and she's shiny, so I would be tempted to do the same!) But, realistically, it's actually okay to put a bit of a crease in the leg, right above the thigh n.n
Now, I'm not trying to be insulting at all. And I feel kinda awkward commenting on a first complete like that! ~ Please, don't feel discouraged <3 I've made exactly the same mistakes and more.
~~ What I do like (Including subject matter of course!) Is, first and fore most, she's got an expression. Fuck yeah! ~ So many people upload totally flat, expressionless characters (I lump a lot of the pro-level artists in this one. There's a reason why my favorite's section is rather eclectic x3). Having a good expression carries a lot in my book. She's got a bit of a chin on her muzzle. This is more personal preference, but I like a bit of the chin bump. Seems to round out images quite well. Think you did a pretty good job with her neck too; that's something I constantly struggle with.
And, this is an important one, you've got a good arm length for her. Humans (in my opnion anyway) have really oddly long arms! ~ We just don't tend to notice it that often because our clothes hide it. And we usually don't keep our arms still that often.
Anyway, hope that helps :3 ~ Feel free to hide the comment if it's irritating to you.
Thank you so much for the honest feedback! it's allways great to get a second look from another person :3
im glad you pointed out the things you did, cause I didn't even notice. you work on the same picture for a long time, and some of those details just stop showing up on your radar XD
also, im glad you like the picture. it makes me happy that my hard work doesn't go unnoticed!
im glad you pointed out the things you did, cause I didn't even notice. you work on the same picture for a long time, and some of those details just stop showing up on your radar XD
also, im glad you like the picture. it makes me happy that my hard work doesn't go unnoticed!
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