http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1qV0SN3OZF0

oh, Cool song o:

Hey, would you like some help with this? A lot of this is translated really oddly.

Oh, okay, because by now I have a friend here to help me translate the comic cx. BUT, I will contact you to help me c:
Thank you <3

I'll post what I got on this one (this is a more literal translation though, and i'll include a more "localized" version, as the way Spanish works versus English makes some of it redundant):

Panel 1: The first part is correct on a literal translation, which is what it seems like your friend did here, but it doesn't really make sense. I'd probably make this segment like so:

"The story begins with the destruction of a love that never was. Taking her shame, bitterness, and loneliness, she decides to leave everything behind, including her loved ones and friends.

Saddened by her loss, she decides to go to the snowy mountains to escape the anguish and pain

However, she cannot escape her loneliness"

Panel 2: What I got here is "I can't believe I was with this person...but, they must have had much reason...but, that he will do.." (which i'd put as "I can't believe I was with him...but, they must have had a good reason...but, for him to do this...")

Panel 3: This is fine, though i'd make some changes like so: "But, I will not idly stand by and dwell on those things deep in my heart...idiot..."

Panel 4: I'd make this line "I won't let this consume me...I won't..."

Panel 5: "You can go to hell! And I hope you rot in hell!" (i'd probably translate this as just "I hope you rot in hell!")

Try to send a note not comment x.x

And ty <3

oh I'm definitely going to read this one as long as you keep posting it

Oh, of course, every day I will be taking the page, if you give me time, and I really appreciate it

Hehe i most definitely will

Thank you

thanks. oh and yeah, this is a good comic soo far...