The first part of a two part story featuring Jasmine and her boyfriend, Connor.
I think I could have put more into Connor's side but oh well. It could've been longer I think but I didn't want to stretch it out.
Constructive criticism welcomed.
Jasmine and Connor are mine.
I think I could have put more into Connor's side but oh well. It could've been longer I think but I didn't want to stretch it out.
Constructive criticism welcomed.
Jasmine and Connor are mine.
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 19 kB
Listed in Folders
I agree with you, maybe Connor's part was a bit too short and dry. But then again, men tend to be less prone to talk about details and usually prefer to go straight to the point, whereas females love to give extensive and very precise descriptions of places and situations.
I liked it, I can't wait to see more of them in the future, both in episodes and in girth! Keep up those great stories!
I liked it, I can't wait to see more of them in the future, both in episodes and in girth! Keep up those great stories!
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