just a robot guy I'm working on and helpfull crit and sugestions are welcome
anyways
enjoy
anyways
enjoy
Category Artwork (Digital) / Miscellaneous
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 600 x 900px
File Size 84.7 kB
look liek a medabot^^"
you should maybe try to slom the feet... and some wireducts on the hingens would make it more mechanic insted of an armor
the eyes look to cartoonic...
try to make it more liek lights with a bitglow like the other colours you should try blue green and white.
but teh dynamic look is nice...
i think that would be a good scoutrobot in camuflage
you should maybe try to slom the feet... and some wireducts on the hingens would make it more mechanic insted of an armor
the eyes look to cartoonic...
try to make it more liek lights with a bitglow like the other colours you should try blue green and white.
but teh dynamic look is nice...
i think that would be a good scoutrobot in camuflage
I liek the feeling.
I liek the head, but the ears i would but more behind the eyes lvl and longuer.
I'd make the forarms bigguer to match the dinamic the big boots.
Sholder pads bigguer or smaller, but if you go bigguer, i'd put a glass power things like you have on your chest ont hem.
Make the power chest glass cercle thing stick more out with more teck crap on it.
All and all, still a ncie character =)
I liek the head, but the ears i would but more behind the eyes lvl and longuer.
I'd make the forarms bigguer to match the dinamic the big boots.
Sholder pads bigguer or smaller, but if you go bigguer, i'd put a glass power things like you have on your chest ont hem.
Make the power chest glass cercle thing stick more out with more teck crap on it.
All and all, still a ncie character =)
Whereas I do like the overall design and coloring I think the head could use some work.
The eyes are a bit too organic for something that supposed to be a robot, it actually reminds me of a battlesuit.
Depending what you're going for his body could probably due to be a little less sleek. perhaps like a droid or something cybertronian.
That's really all I can offer at the moment, I'm not good at describing this sort of thing.
The eyes are a bit too organic for something that supposed to be a robot, it actually reminds me of a battlesuit.
Depending what you're going for his body could probably due to be a little less sleek. perhaps like a droid or something cybertronian.
That's really all I can offer at the moment, I'm not good at describing this sort of thing.
I like it over all, just looks a little flat around the torso and head. It's a sketch, so it doesn't really BOTHER-bother me.
The soft eyes throw me a little: Jars the eye compared to all of the 'hard' edges. Unless it's a guy in a suit, I'd go with a solid visor.
Nothing else about it really bothers me. Nice so far.
The soft eyes throw me a little: Jars the eye compared to all of the 'hard' edges. Unless it's a guy in a suit, I'd go with a solid visor.
Nothing else about it really bothers me. Nice so far.
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