
Well, here it is, the final picture that i have been working on.
BG done in Illustrator CS3
Pins snagged from the internet
I am really proud of this picture :3
Art © Me
Pins © Square Enix
BG done in Illustrator CS3
Pins snagged from the internet
I am really proud of this picture :3
Art © Me
Pins © Square Enix
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fat Furs
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 1280 x 1280px
File Size 831.6 kB
whent he game was being made for america, they took out 4 pins and added 4 new ones that appear in the american versions only.
sushi, shinobi, fuji yama and daruma.
those 4 are the only ones where i havnt found a high res jpeg of like the 6 i used in this picture.
and pavo real has 2 stone pins, a bomb pin and one wind pin, as far as i can recall right now.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v.....ng/Pin_039.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v.....ng/Pin_035.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v.....ng/Pin_040.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v.....ng/Pin_041.png
sushi, shinobi, fuji yama and daruma.
those 4 are the only ones where i havnt found a high res jpeg of like the 6 i used in this picture.
and pavo real has 2 stone pins, a bomb pin and one wind pin, as far as i can recall right now.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v.....ng/Pin_039.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v.....ng/Pin_035.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v.....ng/Pin_040.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v.....ng/Pin_041.png
I knew someone would yell at me without knowing that Zero and I are IRL friends, and that my comment was in jest. I just never would have expected it to be someone who KNOWS me, has interacted with me at meets and has always been a nice guy when I met him, Wolfgang.
I'm not some random internet bitch. And I'm sure if you asked Zero, he would have told you he probably didn't care about my comment. If I indeed offended or upset him, my apologies. I owe him extra cute next time I see him. If Zero wants to me seriously critique his work, he knows I am more than capable of doing so, pointing out the good and bad and how he can fix the bad, digital or not. This comment was obviously not a serious critique. If it'll make you and everyone else feel better, ignore my previous comment and here is a full critique of the piece.
If you do look, the pins are indeed still pixelized, but I'm not going to say it destroys the entire picture, and they aren't even the focus of the piece. If anything, regardless of how they look, the variation in size of the pins give it great depth. Zero's placement of the character is really nice, and the tail being cut off, even the very tip shows maturity of an artist. Rather than squish the whole character in there, he can accept that. The attempts at showing light and dark are really nice, and they follow each other, instead of being random with no definite light source. I admire the action in this piece, because that's often something that's hard to capture. The pins also help the movement of the piece. Trying to keep the eye moving though-out a picture is something not always so easy to do, but Zero's got it going for him in this picture. Another thing I truly admire is the foreshortening of the hand. It's pretty damn accurate, and we all know foreshortening is a bitch. The simple background is great for such an action packed foreground. One of the complaints that's gotten me in trouble is the pins. To me, they still are pixelized, and though you say you took them into illustrator, I can't exactly tell you what went wrong. I'm not a digital artist by trade, but to me they still look off. I could be wrong. My next and final complaint is how your outlines on the character are so sketchy. That could have been something you wanted, but it bothers me a bit. Mainly because you then have bold colors laid down, and though the shading and highlighting is soft, it still has the cartoon look to it. I don't know if the sketchy lines were something you wanted to do, but again, it's minor. Again, I'm not a digital artist and critiquing digital art is a bit harder to me and can often seem vague. I've been trained for 6 years on traditional artwork, nothing illustrative and certainly not in the digital realms.
Again, my apologies to anyone who was offended by my comment. As far as I know, the comment was in fun to my dear friend, who I hope took it in jest. I wouldn't want him or anyone to take 2 sentences littered with colorful language and an internet meme seriously.
I'm not some random internet bitch. And I'm sure if you asked Zero, he would have told you he probably didn't care about my comment. If I indeed offended or upset him, my apologies. I owe him extra cute next time I see him. If Zero wants to me seriously critique his work, he knows I am more than capable of doing so, pointing out the good and bad and how he can fix the bad, digital or not. This comment was obviously not a serious critique. If it'll make you and everyone else feel better, ignore my previous comment and here is a full critique of the piece.
If you do look, the pins are indeed still pixelized, but I'm not going to say it destroys the entire picture, and they aren't even the focus of the piece. If anything, regardless of how they look, the variation in size of the pins give it great depth. Zero's placement of the character is really nice, and the tail being cut off, even the very tip shows maturity of an artist. Rather than squish the whole character in there, he can accept that. The attempts at showing light and dark are really nice, and they follow each other, instead of being random with no definite light source. I admire the action in this piece, because that's often something that's hard to capture. The pins also help the movement of the piece. Trying to keep the eye moving though-out a picture is something not always so easy to do, but Zero's got it going for him in this picture. Another thing I truly admire is the foreshortening of the hand. It's pretty damn accurate, and we all know foreshortening is a bitch. The simple background is great for such an action packed foreground. One of the complaints that's gotten me in trouble is the pins. To me, they still are pixelized, and though you say you took them into illustrator, I can't exactly tell you what went wrong. I'm not a digital artist by trade, but to me they still look off. I could be wrong. My next and final complaint is how your outlines on the character are so sketchy. That could have been something you wanted, but it bothers me a bit. Mainly because you then have bold colors laid down, and though the shading and highlighting is soft, it still has the cartoon look to it. I don't know if the sketchy lines were something you wanted to do, but again, it's minor. Again, I'm not a digital artist and critiquing digital art is a bit harder to me and can often seem vague. I've been trained for 6 years on traditional artwork, nothing illustrative and certainly not in the digital realms.
Again, my apologies to anyone who was offended by my comment. As far as I know, the comment was in fun to my dear friend, who I hope took it in jest. I wouldn't want him or anyone to take 2 sentences littered with colorful language and an internet meme seriously.
eep D:
I'm sorry for the drama. i think your comment, though indeed a joke now that i look at it after having some sleep, took me off guad at one in the morning when i was waiting for positive feedback and stuff.
indeed the pins are pixelated, prolly because enlarging them from their original size did that since the pins were premade and not my design. i did give credit to square enix for those.
again, I'm sorry :(
I'm sorry for the drama. i think your comment, though indeed a joke now that i look at it after having some sleep, took me off guad at one in the morning when i was waiting for positive feedback and stuff.
indeed the pins are pixelated, prolly because enlarging them from their original size did that since the pins were premade and not my design. i did give credit to square enix for those.
again, I'm sorry :(
lol You should take up Strype on one of his $250 commishes. xD
But, yeah, just an observation. I think it came out good. Only problem is the sketchiness of the lineart and the arm(they don't bend that way! D:) </unsolicitedcriticism> :P
Also, 4 days into the game: I just got to the pudding line. I wish I hadn't been on the bus so I could've laughed a lot louder. x3
But, yeah, just an observation. I think it came out good. Only problem is the sketchiness of the lineart and the arm(they don't bend that way! D:) </unsolicitedcriticism> :P
Also, 4 days into the game: I just got to the pudding line. I wish I hadn't been on the bus so I could've laughed a lot louder. x3
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