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Set after an apocalyptic event, the story follows Shawn Mogensen, a character originally part of a ‘suicide squad’ of soldiers.
As far as I understand it this was a first attempt at a furry novel by the author, and it suffers more than a few issues relating to a freshman attempt. Most of my thoughts are contained within. I hope my comments were criticism without being critical.
The readers digest version is after having read the piece, I'm not really sure this counts as a furry novel. Additionally, the plot was a little difficult to follow, and the characters motives needed some additional development.
I was a little nervous honestly about posting this, given that I haven't really written myself in over a year, and that the first two (for a different author) I didn't ask the author if they wanted to preview the review, but in all cases I am as honest and fair as I think I can be, and with luck the author will appreciate my thoughts.
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cynnamin
As far as I understand it this was a first attempt at a furry novel by the author, and it suffers more than a few issues relating to a freshman attempt. Most of my thoughts are contained within. I hope my comments were criticism without being critical.
The readers digest version is after having read the piece, I'm not really sure this counts as a furry novel. Additionally, the plot was a little difficult to follow, and the characters motives needed some additional development.
I was a little nervous honestly about posting this, given that I haven't really written myself in over a year, and that the first two (for a different author) I didn't ask the author if they wanted to preview the review, but in all cases I am as honest and fair as I think I can be, and with luck the author will appreciate my thoughts.
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Category Story / Miscellaneous
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Not that I knew of. The next chapter mentions something about picking them up, but not why or how. It seems like picking up five mutilated corpses from several states over with no apparent value would require some explanation. Somehow the hero is now in a different body and must do some work to 'earn his rent', but I'd still have some questions before I got that far, myself.
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