I had this silly idea for a quick comic and started to scribbles concepts and it more or less turned into a messy final design. I'm actually using this and working it over digitally to make the actual comic. I'm trying to get a better feel for comic book layout. Still have some work to do.

I'm on the final frame of the real thing (still black and white, but it's getting late) and messed up one frame that didn't really have room for the desired text.

Yes, this was scribbled out on lined paper. That's been fixed. You'll get to see the comparison as soon as the finished thing is uploaded.