So I want to submit her as a "shaper concept" for this game "dawngate" imagine if she actually makes it! it would be awesome. I'm posting it here tho, too see if you like the abilities, taking sugestions and everything, and if you are familiar with mobas as well with game play, posting all stats here.

[Shaper Concept] Lillian, the unwinged.
Lillian, the un-winged

Role: Melee, Assassin, Physical.
Resource: Energy
Vitality: Will

Description:

Abilities:

Passive – Pure shaper – Will

When Lillians health drops below 25% she gains a bonus 10% on defense, magic resist and attack damage.


Q Spell – Dash
Spell Type: Skill shoot straight line/area damage
First cast If hit: 30/60/90/140/200 physical damage (plus 50% Power)
Second cast: Lillian swings her sword damaging anything on her range (instant cast and consumes 1 stack and must be used before 3 seconds else it goes back to the first cast)
Cool down: 10/9/8/7/6 when 0 stacks for 1 stack.
Cool down 4/4/3/2/2 with stacks. (max of 4)

Lillian jumps forward slamming anyone on her way with her body then swings her sword for a double burst, when four stacks she may cast the Q a third time to repeat the process after the stacks cool down is complete.

Notes:
- Her range is not defined yet.
-She can damage up to all 5 enemies if they are close enough.
- Ideal for chasing as you can dash 4 times if you wait for the cool down.


W Spell – Sonic squeal
Spell Type: No target cast, makes enemies on the area visible.
Time visible: 2/3/4/5/6
Range: Not defined yet
Cool down: 30/25/20/20/20
Gives one stack for every enemy spotted.

Naturally as a bat Lillian squeals making her enemies visible on a certain range giving her one stack for every found enemy.

Notes:
-when in 0 stacks on the Q the cool down wont be reset and have to wait until the cool down is done to use the stacks.
- She can get more stacks while on her ultimate.



E Spell – Handgrip hit.
Spell Type: Cast on target on range.
Effect: slows down an enemy for 20/25/30/35/40% movement speed for 2 seconds dealing 35/55/75/95/115 (+30% Power) damage, if the second Q cast hits while slowed it will stun the target for 1 second.
Range: Not defined yet, probably short.
Cool down: 9/8/7/6/5

Lillian tries to get you off balance letting the heavy swords handgrip hit you on the head.



Ultimate – The exile’s will
Description: Lillian moves her left hand ignoring the bracelet of remorse grabbing her two handed sword with both hands.
Spell Type: Damage boost/self cast
Range: none.
Effect: Lillian gains +25/35/50/70/100 (+10% power) bonus attack power for 12 seconds or after the second cast is activated and gains a maximum stacks of 6.
Cool down 250s/200s/150s

Second cast:
Spell Type: attack on target.
Range: medium
Effect: Lillian jumps over her target using both hands hitting it from above reaching the ground dealing 200/270/350(+85% Power) physical damage, + a % of the targets missing health the target's missing health, stunning herself and the target for 3 seconds (if it survives).
One second after hitting the target the impact causes a force push on the sides stunning the reached enemies for one second.
Lillian hurts her arms and damages her sword when hitting the ground reducing her armor and attack damage until the ultimate’s cool down is back up.

Lillian grabs her sword with both hands enduring a great pain on her left hand increasing her damage, when casted again Lillian will throw a fatal blow on the target stunning them both (for 3 seconds) and the nearby enemies (for 1 second if reached) done this Lillian hurts herself and damages the sword dropping her stats.

Notes:
-If you don’t cast the ultimate a second time Lillian wont be hurt and wont lose any stats, but the cool down will be the same.



Appearance:




Lore and Biography:

Name - Lillian
Age - 24
Gender - Female
Species – Dessert bat.
Vitality - Will
Affiliation - Unaffiliated

Lore:
Lillian came from a prestige family of warrior desert bats, she had rather a hard childhood because of her tribes ways. Females were not treated as the males, who were most of them proficient warriors as well as egotists. After growing up she noticed that the only way to become someone on her tribe was to become as good as a man when it came to fighting, so her training began.
The only one who could train her was her brother, who took a while to accept such request, luckily, his brother had more brain than the other bats giving her a chance at it, and first of all, they tried to find a nice weapon for her, knives, bows, short swords, and finally, two handed swords. Lillian had an exceptional technique when it came to using a two handed sword to give her an advantage on bigger bats, years later of hard practice she was able to swing heavier swords throwing stunning blows at any enemy she fought, dueling most young warriors of the tribe. She had archived what she always looked for, the ways of her tribe was slowly changing as she was victorious proving herself as a strong woman. But of course, there was someone who didn't believe on this, sadly, it was the tribes leader, a childish young bat who’s father had died months before making him the new leader, to prove his point he challenged Lillian to a duel which Lillian didn't hesitate to accept.

That very day the whole tribe gathered on one spot to see such an alarming dispute. Before heading to the battle, her brother recommended her to let herself lose, as he was the leader and if she won he would do as he pleased. Lillian’s pride was too high for her to listen to her brother, she wanted the glory of being the best warrior, and her feminist ideas had left her some time ago, now she felt what every man felt when they were as strong as she was. The young bat had as many years of training by his father making it a equal fight when it came to skill, the match lasted for more than five minutes when Lillian managed him to make him drop his sword by slightly cutting his hand, kicking his chest making him fall on the ground leaving him vulnerable with Lillian placing the two handed sword very close to his neck. The leader felt so humiliated that his next words were Lillian’s doom receiving the highest punishment of them all, his counselor tried to stop him but it was useless, he had decided the fate of the young bat.
The punishment was to cut her wings and the exile, but as if this wasn't enough and unfair the leader grabbed her sword when she was in the painful process of getting her wings cut giving her another mark for her to never forget cutting her right eye then placing the bracelet of remorse, which immobilized her left thumb so she can never hold a sword again. After her wounds being attended she had to be kicked out of her own tribe, no one dared to argue at the leader’s word, it was a sad day for everyone on that tribe with Lillian making her own path nowadays seeking to redeem herself and someday get back to the glory she once had.

Dialogue:

Voice-
Serious, strong but still feminine.

Shaper Select-
"Half of my body is broken, but my will… is not.”
"A few scratches wont hold me back from reviving past glories!”

Moving-
"On my way.”
"This way”
"Just try to break my will”
"Where should I go?”
"Wish I could still fly"
"Forward!"
"Don’t mind me, the sword is not heavy."

Attacking-
"Fight back!”
"I will hurt you!”
"I wont think twice!”

Last Hitting-
"Pathetic.”
"Are these things a joke?”
“I’m not used to the currency”

Q spell Dash-
She just makes noises when letting go air from her lungs when jumping.

Second cast-
“Take this!”
“right on your face!”
“Did that hurt?!”

W Spell – Sonic squeal
(After the squeal)

"I know where you are.”
"Trying to hide? Not from a bat.”
“I’m coming for you.”






E Spell – Handgrip hit.

“Ha! Right on the head!”
“Slow down!”
“Trying to run away?”




Ultimate – The exile’s will

“Reviving past glories…”
“Now you’ll see what I’m capable of…”
“Must… endure… the pain.”
“I’ll DESTROY YOU!”

Second cast:

“Arrgh! the pain won’t stop me!”
“I can… still fight!”

Taking Damage-
"Ugh!”
"I’ve taken worse!”
"That’s all you’ve got?”

Dying-
"Not… yet!...”
"Argh!”
"Ugh! Must… resist a little… longer…”

Respawn-
"Can’t get rid of me that easily”
"There was a fly on my good eye.”
"I’m going to fight seriously now. “

Triple Kill-

"Glorious!”
“Got some serious injuries on your team right there!”

Omnikill-
"My will can’t be broken! If I touch you, I KILL YOU!”

Assisting-
"I let you have that one.”
"Sharing the glory doesn’t hurt.”
"They can’t win if we work together”

Missing Ping-
"Someone’s not here.”
"Heh, looks like they can’t fight on sight.”


Danger Ping-
"Fall back now!”
"I can’t save you from that one!”
"Looks too dangerous”

Retreat Ping-
"You’re going to get killed!”
"fly away! I mean! Never mind.”
"Hold on!”

On the Way Ping-
"Getting in position.”
"Wait for me!”
"Moving as fast as I can!”

Defend Ping-
"Defensive positions!”
"We can’t lose this one!”
"Requesting some back up here!”

Warding-
"Useless things, well, they are here.”
"I can see with my eye too.”
"There we go, on sight.”


Victory-
"One step closer to past glories.”
"They couldn’t handle the power, but it was a honorable battle.”

Defeat-
"There is honor on defeat.”
"I won’t repeat the same mistakes again, be prepared…”