
I am what I is, and that's all there is.
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I think it would be quite a redundant statement to emphasize the idiosyncrasy of this poem of yours, judging how it is a definition of you elaborated through the exploitation of artistic mannerisms.
You've done an excellent job at throwing me into an intriguing situation. It is hard to analyze such a poem ( except for its structure ) without adopting an aura of subjectivity. I personally believe these kind of poems can be extrapolated to an ordeal of embedding one's self through as deepest and most harmonious metaphors as possible.
And I believe you provided a harmonious description of yourself.
The flow is... very sleek. And there was enjoyment in reading it.
The structure is nicely conveyed, too. Basically, I can easily observe your typical style and I like this traditionalist aura.
I liked it. My commendations.
~Ed
You've done an excellent job at throwing me into an intriguing situation. It is hard to analyze such a poem ( except for its structure ) without adopting an aura of subjectivity. I personally believe these kind of poems can be extrapolated to an ordeal of embedding one's self through as deepest and most harmonious metaphors as possible.
And I believe you provided a harmonious description of yourself.
The flow is... very sleek. And there was enjoyment in reading it.
The structure is nicely conveyed, too. Basically, I can easily observe your typical style and I like this traditionalist aura.
I liked it. My commendations.
~Ed
Thank you very much for the great reply.
Two things inspired this. The first was that I had just finished replying to a few folks who had posted some rather sexist bits of humor, and I was frustrated. The second is that I had recently added a number of people to my friends list. Mostly folks who added me due to knowing one of my partners.
I wanted to write something that summed me up in a way that gave the broadest possible definition of who, and what I am as a person while being something that would make people smile as well as hopefully serve as a gentle reminder to folks on my friends list that we should all do our best to love & respect one another.
I agree with you that I managed to do that really well here. The structure isn't perfect but then I think that suits it since I'm far from perfect.
Two things inspired this. The first was that I had just finished replying to a few folks who had posted some rather sexist bits of humor, and I was frustrated. The second is that I had recently added a number of people to my friends list. Mostly folks who added me due to knowing one of my partners.
I wanted to write something that summed me up in a way that gave the broadest possible definition of who, and what I am as a person while being something that would make people smile as well as hopefully serve as a gentle reminder to folks on my friends list that we should all do our best to love & respect one another.
I agree with you that I managed to do that really well here. The structure isn't perfect but then I think that suits it since I'm far from perfect.
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