critic please I would love to get better at TF's <3

I'd say you're doing pretty good so far - I really like your panel layout (although I'm not sure 'panel' is the right word - 'facet' might be moe accurate

Thank you for the feedback! <3

For a first tf piece, this moves fairly well. The face shot is my favorite aside from the establishing human shot. It reminds me greatly of the style used by Nojo, and I have no problem with seeing more of that!

As far as anatomy goes, I don't want to mistake a motif or aesthetic preference for, well, a mistake. But since you gave the hands five digits I'd like to mention that raccoon hind paws also have five finger-like digits. Also, the iris is BIG and round, not slits like a cat or fox- even though they all glow in the dark!

Thank you :3
yes I notice what you mean xD and thank you again!
So I will have to work on making sure the anatomy for all animals is correct (raccoon having five toes instead of 4, and the iris being round not silted) <3

There is absolutely nothing wrong with google images and other such searches. I thought I knew how to differentiate a bear from a dog, for example, but it kept coming out wrong until I borrowed a comparative anatomy textbook and got a good look at the skulls.

The image I used for the raccoon didnt show the paws, though I should have looked up more images instead of assuming

It's very good!

One little thing is that the way the small strands of fabric stretch across the tail in the bottom left image without any deformation makes the tail look a bit flat or 2D. Causing the strands to wrap around the top of the tail like a somewhat cylindrical object would add a lot to it's artistic mass.

And I'm glad you avoided the bedroom eyes. It's just a pet peeve of mine, but I always get a little annoyed when I see those.

Aside from that, links to larger versions of the image are always nice. I feel like I'm missing a lot of the nice detail.

Ah ok, So I will have to work on my fabric ripping, thank you.
and what are bedroom eyes?

lastly, ok :3 I will add a link to the bigger version later today (i'm not on the right computer todo that right now xD)

I think he might be talking about bedroom eyes- the kind the tfee has when they become aware of the audience, and decide to get... suggestive.

so like seductive eyes?

Yeah, the kind of eyes that say "I'm going to have the dirtiest kind of sex with this thing that I am looking at" in just about every way without actually saying it. Again, just a pet peeve, but I think they're overused. And I feel odd about a tf-ee going from being freaked out to being sexually aroused and perfectly okay with everything pertaining to that within one or two panels. But now I'm just mini-ranting, so don't mind me too much.

Haha I see :3
I think when they do that is so it's like during the tf it's very pleasurable by if I personally did it like that it wouldn't be a tf that was caused by something else like a potion or magic or something.

I eventually wanna be as good as GillPanda at TF's she is amazing :D

I added a link to the full rez