Has something of a Man of Steel feel to it, like how Metropolis *Spoiler* was totaled in the movie despite Superman *winning*.

ugh I'll take it as a compliment but I'd rather not be compared to 'that' superhero movie

At least it's not Green Lantern.

Nice! A new story I can follow from the start! So far I like it, it's very intriguing and I like the characters so far!

A new series eh? Wonder how long this will take.

*baps*

Really dig the good bit of tragic history you've already managed to sneak in and hint at! And of with a last name like Mutatio I'm looking forward to whatever shenanigans you do to the apparent villain of the story. A fine start, Kusa!

You imply lots of stuff without much in the way of explanation. This isn't a bad thing, but it does agitate me because I am unsure of what has happened in the past. But hey, that's what would draw me back when you release part two. So all is well. It's pretty much all setup, though, so I don't really have much to say other than 'Hey man, make part two so this stuff makes more sense.'

Like why is the sky pink and it's room temperature and the city apparently isolated? If I had to wager a guess the whole city's been shrunk and we got some kind of ant farm situation.

Well, it was a good start, Kusa!

Definitely a good start to an ongoing story. The main characters seem interesting enough and I look forward to learning more about their history.