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first off WOW! this came out extremely well. The lines making up the fur, the eye is way neater than your previous illustrations, just the whole figure's lines came out a lot better. i see a lot of improvement in every illustration you post! i especially love the colors and the gradient in the background!!! the shoulders seem a bit off though, the right arm seems to be a little shorter than the right. idk if his body is facing completely to the front or if his body is a little tilted to the left which would make the right shoulder closer to the viewer, in that case the right shoulder would be a bit smaller than the left . ofc as you progress you will learn about anatomy and foreshortening and all that good stuff ;3 but as of right now and this image, you did more than great!

Wow! Thank you so much! I didn't realize i had improved that much! Yeah, the sketch without fur had the shoulders even, but after i added fur i accidentally made one higher than the other. I thought about shading this one but i need to look at how to do that more. Anatomy is my weakness!!! Thank you again, i shall reflect on what you have said and try to do even better on my next one ^.^

Awwhr, this is a lovely gift! :) Keep going with drawing, can see definite improving talent here. ^w^

Hey thanks o much!