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page eleven
one of the last pages i did all the way to the end. this page is complete, and a much better example of good spacing as far as text balloons is concerned( in my opinion, the last page was terrible, a lot of the art got covered up unfortunately)
tidbit: the coffeehouse front counter in the bottom panel is the spyhouse on lake street right down the street from MCAD.
one of the last pages i did all the way to the end. this page is complete, and a much better example of good spacing as far as text balloons is concerned( in my opinion, the last page was terrible, a lot of the art got covered up unfortunately)
tidbit: the coffeehouse front counter in the bottom panel is the spyhouse on lake street right down the street from MCAD.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Lizard
Size 900 x 1280px
File Size 314.6 kB
It's a tad confusing, some of the speech bubbles. some of the bubbles point (or seem to point) to characters that aren't speaking the text within them- if it's possible, I might suggest either just making the bubbles that are (sorta) problems either just a circle free-floating, or connecting them to the bubble that DOES clearly point to the intended speaker.
other than that, still love it =3 *reads the next page*
other than that, still love it =3 *reads the next page*
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