You say: "Don't like this one too much"
I say: "Still better music than 99% of what's on the radio these days. The melody has an impressionistic touch to it, and sounds awesome :)
There's one thing you could do though^^ You could add a timbal rythm line, as an experiment ;) Just a few hits every now and then, though this might break up the dreamyness/calmly flowing melodies.
I don't really know xD But what I do know is, that this is a very pleasant sensation in my ears.

Thanks so much always glad to hear that you enjoy my music and I agree with you I could use more percussion and one shots to add a bit more to the atmosphere of the track.