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posted 17 years ago Watcher

Not really a ryme but a metaphore that needed to be said.

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17 years ago

I like the point of this piece, but in my opinion, I felt you could have done more to bring out the sting. Like using certain words to replace others, and give the sentences strong emotion. If this is what you intended for, however, then that is fine also.

Nice piece.

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