This is m first submission on this sit, and criticism is welcomed.
The story is about a user here I have met and wanted to make a gift for.
This is his page. http://www.furaffinity.net/user/lolukelawliet98/
His OC: Luke belongs to him
Malcom belong to me.
If he wishes for this to be taken down then it will.
The story is about a user here I have met and wanted to make a gift for.
This is his page. http://www.furaffinity.net/user/lolukelawliet98/
His OC: Luke belongs to him
Malcom belong to me.
If he wishes for this to be taken down then it will.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 15.3 kB
You tease... It made me laugh a bit. Hehe, apart for some minor english mistakes, the sentence structure, story and choice of words were quite good. It was a fun story to read... And I kind of envy them now. Keep writing! I will patiently await your next story. (I suggest the continuity on this one) you won yourself a fav. I am going to read it a few other times now.
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