The second page. This one was a bit harder than I thought, mostly because it took 2 tries. The first time I tired to make the characters as on model as I possibly could, but they looked too stiff and they were frozen in the same poses as the reference I was using, not very good for the action sequence I had in mind to fit with "and saved his homeland." This scene actually grew a bit too large, so I only had room for the one line, but for most pages I'm planning on using at least two lines.