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As the title says, this is a parody. One of Green Day's "Boulevard of Broken Dreams." Since I'm no vocalist and I don't commission others (And who on the face of this God forsaken earth would possibly accept such a commission anyway. Let's be honest), it's only natural that these are only written lyrics. I've had this sitting around forever now... Years, if you'll believe me. The reason for not posting this is simple, really. I'm not happy with it. I'm still not to pleased with it. Well, I've been absent without notice, when I should have given notice, so I'm posting this up as my punishment. It's so horrible... Ugh.
Oh, background info. This is my character, Jacob... Narrating, I guess? Well, it's about him. If you don't know about him, then you could read my story. Alternatively, ask me and I'll answer your questions. I'm fine with explaining my characters. Especially one so dear to me. He shares my name, after all.
Oh, background info. This is my character, Jacob... Narrating, I guess? Well, it's about him. If you don't know about him, then you could read my story. Alternatively, ask me and I'll answer your questions. I'm fine with explaining my characters. Especially one so dear to me. He shares my name, after all.
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There's a point where what you say makes sense when it comes to criticism. This, however, makes you sound like a stupid head. I never criticize my work, and neither does anyone else, but that doesn't matter, and it shouldn't. Albeit, you're a much better poet than a story teller, but that doesn't mean you need to criticize everything you do like it's the worst thing ever.
I've always criticized myself, mainly because everybody else is too nice to do so. It's generally up to me to find my own flaws and work towards fixing them, though I can't say I do a very good job of that. Not enough drive. Not enough conviction.
I believe I'm somewhere on the borderline, where I hate myself and where I'm honest with myself. I want to say that I'm just being honest with myself here. I don't feel that it's a particularly great piece, so I won't pretend that it is. That's all. The point of my writing this in the first place though, it was more for fun and personal enjoyment. I don't know why I like doing these parody things. I just do. It's fun. So, while I'll tell you it's terrible, I don't really care that it is.
I believe I'm somewhere on the borderline, where I hate myself and where I'm honest with myself. I want to say that I'm just being honest with myself here. I don't feel that it's a particularly great piece, so I won't pretend that it is. That's all. The point of my writing this in the first place though, it was more for fun and personal enjoyment. I don't know why I like doing these parody things. I just do. It's fun. So, while I'll tell you it's terrible, I don't really care that it is.
I do like it. I just don't feel that it is particularly good, as far as my writing skills are concerned. While it's terrible, it was fun. That's why I did it even though I knew I wasn't going to post it. Personal amusement. Also, I don't know for sure that your stories are necessarily bad. They're just in bad English (Impressive learning a new language though, I must say. I don't know if I even could learn another language.) I think that it's probably just the fact that they're hard to read that makes them seem awful.
Thank you though.
Thank you though.
if you can use all of those slang terms then you can also learn another one
Anyways, my FIRST (and probably mid) stories are written in bad English and other things, I bash THOSE, after that... I´m starting to get the hang of it, and I like it
Anyways, if you did enjoy them then tell us, that´ll help.
Anyways, my FIRST (and probably mid) stories are written in bad English and other things, I bash THOSE, after that... I´m starting to get the hang of it, and I like it
Anyways, if you did enjoy them then tell us, that´ll help.
I didn't quite catch that last line for some reason. I guess my mind just skipped over it... I generally like most everything I do, FA related. It's hard not to enjoy writing, and there's always something about what I'm writing that I enjoy in particular. Some odd thing or another.
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