
this story too me about a month or more to do after my teach got in my face about it i started writing it for fun an she turned it into work .... but i still had fun writing it an i am writing more on it an this is just chapter one so expect chapter one so expect chapter two ok so even thoe my teacher hounded me for this story i an puting it out here for all of u to read to if u like it let me know ok thanks
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 29.5 kB
Good introduction, I'd say. It explained what needed to be without going into excrutiating detail...too much of that and the reader can lose interest. That didn't happen though, and I was actually all set to continue on with the next chapter. There were a few minor spelling errors here and there, but nothing that really trips you up.
Will the dragon be freed? Just where is the Prince running off to? And what of the Princess? Will she be able to track down her betrothed? So many questions to answer. :p
Will the dragon be freed? Just where is the Prince running off to? And what of the Princess? Will she be able to track down her betrothed? So many questions to answer. :p
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