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This is my second requested card, this one's for Frosty orca. I think it looks pretty good, and it's a bit more balanced to the game than my last couple.
Category All / Fanart
Species Dolphin
Size 798 x 1106px
File Size 1013.4 kB
Listed in Folders
(because I'm a total nerd...)
1. Nice card.
2. His abilities aren't synergistic -- if he has islandwalk, why not let his ability pump himself as well as his teammates? Islandwalk just seems like a waste. He certainly wouldn't be overpowered.
3. I'd word the last ability like this: "Whalesong -- 1U: Other cetaceans get +2/+2 until end of turn." As it is, it's templated as though "whalesong" is part of the cost (before a colon in the ability) but it's clear you want that to be the name of the ability and irrelevant to it's actual effect on the game state. Using the italicized "ability-word" type thing (see any card with Hellbent or Sweep abilities) gives the impression you're looking for.
1. Nice card.
2. His abilities aren't synergistic -- if he has islandwalk, why not let his ability pump himself as well as his teammates? Islandwalk just seems like a waste. He certainly wouldn't be overpowered.
3. I'd word the last ability like this: "Whalesong -- 1U: Other cetaceans get +2/+2 until end of turn." As it is, it's templated as though "whalesong" is part of the cost (before a colon in the ability) but it's clear you want that to be the name of the ability and irrelevant to it's actual effect on the game state. Using the italicized "ability-word" type thing (see any card with Hellbent or Sweep abilities) gives the impression you're looking for.
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