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As per my paranoia, the following story contains the following things you might find offensive/icky:
-Religious undertones
So yeah, I was feeling rather shitty today.
Ya see, I've got this thing - it's called a Past. For the most part, this "Past" is a bad thing. More often than not, it likes to sneak up on me, grab hold, and drag me down to the point where I wanna put on a Hawthorne Heights album and open a MySpace account.
Like any sane person, I decided to put those feelings into text.
It's rather short for most of my other work; this is a paltry two pages as opposed to my usual 4-5 page minimum. I was unsure of how to stretch this any further. After all, I wanted it to be quick.
For My Sins features my own personal Fursonae (Micah and Ki'Taye), and also displays my general lack of knowledge about most religions.
I'd like you guys to be careful with this one - my views on religion, as well as my thoughts about myself, are put on display here.
-Religious undertones
So yeah, I was feeling rather shitty today.
Ya see, I've got this thing - it's called a Past. For the most part, this "Past" is a bad thing. More often than not, it likes to sneak up on me, grab hold, and drag me down to the point where I wanna put on a Hawthorne Heights album and open a MySpace account.
Like any sane person, I decided to put those feelings into text.
It's rather short for most of my other work; this is a paltry two pages as opposed to my usual 4-5 page minimum. I was unsure of how to stretch this any further. After all, I wanted it to be quick.
For My Sins features my own personal Fursonae (Micah and Ki'Taye), and also displays my general lack of knowledge about most religions.
I'd like you guys to be careful with this one - my views on religion, as well as my thoughts about myself, are put on display here.
Category Story / Abstract
Species Raccoon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 7.3 kB
I think you did well with this. Portraying the church as something that seemed to be attuned with everything in it except Micah was a really good way to show that you feel awkward in churches. I liked that Micah showed wonder towards thing he didn't know much about though; The abundance of candles used, for example. It just felt a little more realistic that way, even if it was a minute detail. Using the stained glass window to support Micah was also really neat.
I enjoyed it, good work with this one.
I enjoyed it, good work with this one.
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