I think this is a good start. Given the Rainboomed events, which I'm assuming is after this or during one of the nights, it may be important for Twilight and the others to remember the lesson from Zecora about judging folks before getting to know them.

*Chuckles* It's the way I write Indagare. It's not enough for me to say
my Changeling is special, I actually have to figure out why she's special
and then prove it to my readers. Rainboomed is exactly that, though
it's only half of her back story. As for Paradise itself, I need to go back
to the beginning, because it's choppy, inconsistent, and very possibly
too coy in parts. And I need a much, much better grasp of the overall
plot. If you want, I can shoot you my e-mail and we can go over it
what I think are it's problems in detail.